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rain songs
your curved
white
tiny waves
forming,
clear outlines,
you break
the surface
with thin
drumming,
sing
your rain
songs,
sing down
on us,
your stories
anchor
themselves
along
our shoreline.
white
tiny waves
forming,
clear outlines,
you break
the surface
with thin
drumming,
sing
your rain
songs,
sing down
on us,
your stories
anchor
themselves
along
our shoreline.
Published 19th Dec 2023
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19th Dec 2023 11:37pm
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21st Dec 2023 2:21am
I really enjoyed the way you used storytelling to compliment nature. You had the rain compliment the natural surrounding, instead of destroying it, and that was really well done. The entire homage to a keeper of the rain was really nice.
21st Dec 2023 4:16am
