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Worship You
I could worship you
But
I know I would lose my soul
In you
I've not that much time
Let's leave good enough alone
In deep like
But
I know I would lose my soul
In you
I've not that much time
Let's leave good enough alone
In deep like
Author's Note
If you think this poem is about you …. It is
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8th Dec 2023 4:12pm
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8th Dec 2023 5:36pm
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8th Dec 2023 7:39pm
A little Carly Simon here, but it's cool. The secrecy adds to the piece in a way. Tight
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8th Dec 2023 7:53pm
Yeah, I channeled Carly a bit. Didn't notice it until I wrote it. But it's cool, that was a great song that lives on ...
Appreciate your reads and comments ME
THX
Appreciate your reads and comments ME
THX
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8th Dec 2023 10:04pm
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8th Dec 2023 10:34pm
I think so too.
This was an experimental write. I have always written in characters and hypothetical romantic situations...
This was an experimental write. I have always written in characters and hypothetical romantic situations...
Re. Worship You
9th Dec 2023 2:58am
I'm intrigued!! LOL
What a great mind tease.
I truly enjoy mysteries!!
And I read it backwards too - lol
pretty awesome!
Deep Liked this Poem!
What a great mind tease.
I truly enjoy mysteries!!
And I read it backwards too - lol
pretty awesome!
Deep Liked this Poem!
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Re: Re. Worship You
9th Dec 2023 3:04am
Let's just say I write from experience but place this character in a fictional wish to be.
My passion is alive and well in a Poetspeak mystery write.
Love the deep like A
Stay tuned !
My passion is alive and well in a Poetspeak mystery write.
Love the deep like A
Stay tuned !
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Anonymous
9th Dec 2023 10:15am
As great as the poem is, the author's note is a great cap to it
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9th Dec 2023 12:50pm
People remember the song and the poem needed a lighter conclusion.
Appreciate your comment.
Thx
Appreciate your comment.
Thx
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9th Dec 2023 11:47am
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Re. Worship You
10th Dec 2023 3:43am
Finally, you wrote me a poem!! 🤣😉
Nah, you know I'm just yanking your chain... this is great, leaves us all scratching our heads. Tantalizing mystery. Deep like is the good stuff.
❤️k
Nah, you know I'm just yanking your chain... this is great, leaves us all scratching our heads. Tantalizing mystery. Deep like is the good stuff.
❤️k
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10th Dec 2023 4:05am
Like a good yank for this Yankee !!
It is what you want it to be ...
Everyone wins !!
Thanks Red ❤
It is what you want it to be ...
Everyone wins !!
Thanks Red ❤
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15th Dec 2023 2:13pm
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