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Heat
Little doubt my feelings for you
I love you and it's crippling
Bewitched and under a spell
vulnerable to the touch
I find myself under your control
A mind bending situation
knowing you master me
you call my bluff and I fold
I don't know when I relinquished my power
giving you full reign over me
It's a given I was directionless
wandering through the earth without anchor
Tiny dreamer of hope
I never expected to love you
I wasn't given to such a fascination
Now I find myself beholden to desire
lusts of carnality only you feed
masochistic wants you provoke
I think to walk away
then you push the right buttons
and like a bitch I heel
Published 4th Dec 2023
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4th Dec 2023 10:21pm
Whew, this is so hot with desire and passion. I really felt it. You are an artist.
4th Dec 2023 10:42pm
thank you graciously dearest poet it's the truth if perhaps a little dramatic 💕 I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
4th Dec 2023 10:52pm
You bend my mind in wonderful ways ( loved the mind bending part)
Peace and love to you 🖤 ⭐
Peace and love to you 🖤 ⭐
4th Dec 2023 10:54pm
hello beautiful Debbie thank you graciously for the love here peace and love 💕
4th Dec 2023 11:01pm
In some ways it's good that someone can have this kind of pull over us. I'm all for it actually cos it's like almost re-discovering our youth! 😊
4th Dec 2023 11:09pm
hello dearest Billy that might just be what it is but it is frightening to give power to another...thank you for sharing your thoughts 💕
4th Dec 2023 11:12pm
You're only conceding power cos you love it, I think. You are a grown woman, so I need not say any more, lol. I hope somehow all your dreams work out. 😊
4th Dec 2023 11:27pm
thank you Billy life his set me up to be vulnerable to such a degree that I accept pain as a part of love but yes I am old enough to decide and I seem to enjoy it...💕
4th Dec 2023 11:30pm
Oh dear oh dear! I would never accept love as a form of pain. Love isn't about pain, it should be about joy. 😉
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5th Dec 2023 00:03am
I'm really liking this piece, we think that every human has it's kryptonite. Yes that one someone that we can't see through that has that force. Tight
5th Dec 2023 00:37am
21st Dec 2023 2:00am
“ find myself beholden to desire
lusts of carnality only you feed
masochistic wants you provoke”
This and the last stanza invoke that desire so clearly, even when we sometimes don’t want to give in.
Amazing spill
lusts of carnality only you feed
masochistic wants you provoke”
This and the last stanza invoke that desire so clearly, even when we sometimes don’t want to give in.
Amazing spill
