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And do We know
what is the dream we chase?
paces set for ambitions and hopes
determined to reach the stars
we strive and wish and aspire
what is the essence of our soul?
shadows with stories untold
a hint of the mystical a little divine
what is this life's tapestry?
woven with tears sealed with kisses
yet chances are there are lies behind the pearly curtains
paces set for ambitions and hopes
determined to reach the stars
we strive and wish and aspire
what is the essence of our soul?
shadows with stories untold
a hint of the mystical a little divine
what is this life's tapestry?
woven with tears sealed with kisses
yet chances are there are lies behind the pearly curtains
Published 4th Dec 2023
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Written for a competition
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5th Dec 2023 3:18am
5th Dec 2023 9:21am
Thank you Harry for dropping by , reading and commenting. And yes, half truths too.:)
5th Dec 2023 6:01am
Dear G,
Profound notion. Do we know what is the dream we chase? I always thought I did until I got it. Regret not having more than one dream. This poem is absolute lovely in its reflection and insight. All the best for the comp. H🌷
Profound notion. Do we know what is the dream we chase? I always thought I did until I got it. Regret not having more than one dream. This poem is absolute lovely in its reflection and insight. All the best for the comp. H🌷
5th Dec 2023 9:24am
Dear H, Thank you so much for reading me. We dream and aspire and when we are there, its not what we thought it was. Life throws us that all the time, and sometimes we catch it sometimes we miss it by a mile. :)
5th Dec 2023 9:39am
Lies behind the pearly curtain. Chances are - suggest a little naïveté could be symbolic of hope but not with blindness. I really liked this piece.
5th Dec 2023 10:22am
Hope creates a lot of circumstances and eventualities. Seize the day they say but what was in fact seized? Thank You for reading Robert:) and commenting.
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7th Dec 2023 3:53pm
We all chase different things in life. Sometimes it is okay to chase after love. Keep on writing.
8th Dec 2023 12:06pm
