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Arianelle
Arianelle, where have you gone?
As quickly as you came,
You have upped sticks and vanished.
Who is going to light my mornings now,
Who is going to fill the void?
You were a breath of fresh air,
Young, natural and distractively pretty,
Able to stop traffic in its tracks -
Intelligent with the world at your feet,
Oh and a good poet too, whoops! My bad.
What on Earth has happened to you, this brief flourish -
Was someone upsetting you?
Maybe you have found somewhere better to go,
Or maybe, just maybe, you're taking a break,
So that you'll return even stronger than before.
Beauty like yours is rare but we must remember...
It is only skin deep and won't save the day.
The soul, the essence, the deepness of our being,
Will outlast everything.
I just hope we haven't heard the last from you...
That's all.
As quickly as you came,
You have upped sticks and vanished.
Who is going to light my mornings now,
Who is going to fill the void?
You were a breath of fresh air,
Young, natural and distractively pretty,
Able to stop traffic in its tracks -
Intelligent with the world at your feet,
Oh and a good poet too, whoops! My bad.
What on Earth has happened to you, this brief flourish -
Was someone upsetting you?
Maybe you have found somewhere better to go,
Or maybe, just maybe, you're taking a break,
So that you'll return even stronger than before.
Beauty like yours is rare but we must remember...
It is only skin deep and won't save the day.
The soul, the essence, the deepness of our being,
Will outlast everything.
I just hope we haven't heard the last from you...
That's all.
Author's Note
(195) Just paying homage to all the pretty poetesses who used to reside on these pages. If you're reading this 'honeys' please come back! Hope you don't me calling you that! Lol. ;-)
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Re. Arianelle
2nd Dec 2023 10:10pm
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2nd Dec 2023 10:15pm
Lol... I know, I know. It's ok. Thank you very much both for the visit & the humour. It's very much appreciated. ;-)
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Don't worry we arianelle's of the world are still around 🤗🤗. Such a beautiful and sweet ode to all the poets, who can strum the sweetest chords in your heart.
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3rd Dec 2023 3:42am
Chords... yeah, believe it or not, I'm still tryna perfect 'em into the sweetest love song that's ever been played... IT'S TRUE! ;-)
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3rd Dec 2023 3:42am
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3rd Dec 2023 3:59am
I rather like some of your spills too Philis, if I'm honest. Thank you. ;-)
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3rd Dec 2023 4:10am
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3rd Dec 2023 5:34am
Re. Arianelle
3rd Dec 2023 5:34am
I understand your feelings... She is really beautiful N she must be beautiful in heart too... Nice..
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3rd Dec 2023 5:39am
She must be a lot like you then, Dimpy. Thank you so very much for taking a look at this one.;-)
Re. Arianelle
7th Dec 2023 5:02pm
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7th Dec 2023 5:05pm
Thank you for being here & for commenting, peninnah, the poet of Beirut. 😊
Re. Arianelle
13th Dec 2023 2:46am
What a sweet trap. Lol.
Although I love the vibe of the write, I am immune sir. Lol.
This is such a lovely poem, by the way. All the imagery lulling the (female)readers to swoon.
I just like good reads, and this is definitely one of them.
Great job Billy .
Although I love the vibe of the write, I am immune sir. Lol.
This is such a lovely poem, by the way. All the imagery lulling the (female)readers to swoon.
I just like good reads, and this is definitely one of them.
Great job Billy .
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Re: Re. Arianelle
13th Dec 2023 2:58am
Thank you, Styxian! We both know beauty alone won't save the day even though it helps. I never want it to rule my thinking. I would hate to think I am corruptible, lol! 😉
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15th Dec 2023 2:20pm
She almost looks like Drew Barrymore. I enjoyed this piece Billy. Solid and fun.
LJ
LJ
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31st Dec 2023 1:59am
Such a lovely poem, Billy. Your respect for the poetess’ on DUP is truly appreciated.
I am grateful to have you as a friend. I’ve missed you😊
I am grateful to have you as a friend. I’ve missed you😊
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Re: Re. Arianelle
7th Jan 2024 3:40am
Thank you Mary. This goes out to everyone I'll miss from time to time. It's inevitable really. :-)
Re. Arianelle
26th Jan 2024 1:45pm
That's interesting. Too true though, Billy, many have left the site and some may have return with different usernames. I have not seen a few people now for a while. That's a pretty young lady there.
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Re: Re. Arianelle
26th Jan 2024 1:57pm
It is true that someone upset this lady & she left the site. I am no saint either. Sometimes I get upset with people & have lost my cool from time to time on here but I am continually trying to rein it in, taking a breath before saying something I may regret later. Thank you Grace for your input. 😊
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26th Jan 2024 2:07pm
Most left because of being upset. I was called names a few times, but I think I am thick skinned, I let them slide. So I am still here..more than ten years now.
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26th Jan 2024 2:10pm
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27th Jan 2024 3:34pm
People come and people go. And lots of times they come back if only for a short time. This is a nice dedication.
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19th Feb 2024 9:00pm
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19th Feb 2024 9:09pm
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22nd Feb 2024 3:54am
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It could be about you, you know? That is the mystery of Billy until you discover that he's full of nonsense, lol. May you not discover that for many many years to come, lol. Thanks for the nod on this one, mysteriouslady. 😉
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22nd Feb 2024 3:58am
HAHA great response. Arent we all a little full of shit here? Especially here!
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Re. Arianelle
7th May 2024 10:55pm
I've noticed all the pretty women on sites like this have a tendency to disappear without notice never to return. Finicky people I guess. Loyalty means nothing to them when they can attention elsewhere.
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I think what you're saying is, maybe we need to try harder to keep them here. I can only speak for myself of course but I thank you for sharing your thoughts on this, Dragonblood. 😊
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7th May 2024 10:59pm
No, you can't keep them here. lol They're going to do what they're going to do. Enjoy them while they last.
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7th May 2024 11:00pm
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7th May 2024 11:34pm
the children are here among you they are safe she is empathetic as you all are she has done mischief magic according to her will and morals born of the onyx kingdom and taken to the golden kingdom for healing as she was terribly scarred she is merciful to all beings and forms she is walking worlds trying to save the mislead souls that wander she is in the grey now they see her light and come forth they are shaken by the war in the heavens and in the hells... be patient she is fierce but frightened of the moon she fears wants to kill her Father.
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7th May 2024 11:40pm
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8th May 2024 00:13am
Moon lady? No, I did not seek her permission because I do not know who she is. Do you always seek permission on the 'artwork' you use to accompany your poems?