The Perfect Poem

Dear D,

I’d say this one is perfect. I really like how you’ve pondered the whole idea of what and how perfection might be created. Perfection is an interesting concept to me. I’ve never known it so I like to admire it when I see it. Wonderful write. H🌷

Thank you so much. As a writer, I sometimes get obsessed with writing a great poem, lol.  I think we all do. I just started imagining what that would constitute. I like the perfection of a skill. I don't like living my life trying to be be perfect, been there done that, lol. But that obsession exists so much in society. Appreciate your feedback!
Have a beautiful day. 😊

Perfection comes with the laws of nature and the mind, keeping time as if a pendulum does.

I agree there is so much beautiful perfection in nature. Nothing superficial about it.
Thanks for reading

Good job at capturing some of what goes into writing.  Your use of principle duality to depict truth and lies is interesting.  Very concise, succinct, sound, hard-hitting, compacted lines of meaning in this.  On the quest to know the answers, many people just embrace family roles, such as husband and wife, which is a good thing.  That is an important part of life and will have many defining traits about you.  I don't think truth in the questions of the soul, as you put it, is so much of a profound revelation, as it is basic, given things that have yet to be interjected in the existence of humanity.  Like technology, these days, is common sense.  200 years ago, it would've blown people's minds.  It takes sort of a progression in inspiration and innovation to eventually become common building blocks, and then you build even more.  It's kind of like how you need simplicity to understand complexity, and complexity to understand simplicity.  The simple things of yesterday lead to the complex things of tomorrow.  Things that seemed impossible yesterday are common sense today.  I think that's a lot of how purpose and truth will come to be when they're interjected.  You can grow in your writing like that as well, with more and more to build upon, and more and more to be given, or to explore.  Many writers desire to know purpose in life, or even capturing beauty in creativity as an embrace to inhibit such.  I like to say that perfection is always a possibility, whether it was, is, or will occur, or not - it was, is, and will still always be possible.  With that said, there's always room to improve, as well.  It makes one wonder what contextual application and tenses perfection could possibly exist in.  Well, thank you for stimulating my mind with your poem.  There is a lot of other interpretation it could pertain to, obviously.  Thanks for sharing!

That was quite a stimulation, lol
I enjoyed your feedback very much, it aroused my mind.
Thanks for checking out!