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Opulence of Nature
Listen to the silence as you linger
of life's evaporation to a vapor
and touch the twilight of time
searching the scented glossary
with the fragrance of Shalimar
for that which you dream
earth's notes to sandalwoods
of life's evaporation to a vapor
and touch the twilight of time
searching the scented glossary
with the fragrance of Shalimar
for that which you dream
earth's notes to sandalwoods
Published 25th Nov 2023
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- Edited 12th Dec 2023 6:45am
25th Nov 2023 8:05pm
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25th Nov 2023 8:09pm
I am mostly a scribbler who like words, I tend to be different than most but keep kicking the can down the road. Thank you for your comment.
25th Nov 2023 8:12pm
25th Nov 2023 8:13pm
I especially enjoyed the line ‘life's evaporation to a vapor’, because of the sense in which the word “evaporation” reduces to “vapor”, with the evaporation, as it were, of letters e, a,t,i,o and n :)
„Twilight of time” is rather good too :)
„Twilight of time” is rather good too :)
25th Nov 2023 8:29pm
