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Wow
The weight of my pulse is heavily palpable
but even more so, the terror that I continue to breathe in the same air as a lunatic while plotting his murder with every single breath I take …
What’s more striking still— is, I’m so pathetic,
I will never make him leave, he has to be the one to go—Either by choice or death
I hate myself…
Written by
Zazzles
(Broomie)
Published 25th Nov 2023
| Edited 10th Mar 2024
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Copyright © November 25, 2023
M. Doucette All rights Reserved.
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Re. Wow
25th Nov 2023 6:22am
hello beautiful I understand believe or not
fate is cruel to us sometimes I love you❤
this is powerful...
fate is cruel to us sometimes I love you❤
this is powerful...
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Re: Re. Wow
25th Nov 2023 6:04pm
Hi Raven, ugh what a fucken night last night.
Thanks for the visit hun.
Love you too ♥️
Your friend
Jackie xo
Thanks for the visit hun.
Love you too ♥️
Your friend
Jackie xo
Re. Wow
25th Nov 2023 6:27am
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25th Nov 2023 6:04pm
Re. Wow
25th Nov 2023 8:55am
Wow...
:ppp
(This individual may not fully
realize what they are dealing with...
I got: Duct tape, a shove and bail money...)
:ppp
(This individual may not fully
realize what they are dealing with...
I got: Duct tape, a shove and bail money...)
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Re: Re. Wow
25th Nov 2023 6:05pm
Re. Wow
25th Nov 2023 1:29pm
Followed to your new location?
Hugs Sis, insightful poem into your dilemma. Hugs. 🤗
Hugs Sis, insightful poem into your dilemma. Hugs. 🤗
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Re: Re. Wow
Unfortunately I needed his income to be eligible for this amazing apartment. Luckily we spend most of our time in separate rooms. But when he drinks he is a true mouthy cock suckah!
Loves you Leo♥️
Jackie xo
Loves you Leo♥️
Jackie xo
Re. Wow
25th Nov 2023 4:38pm
Re: Re. Wow
Yeah sometimes you have to deal with bullshit to enjoy a little joy- him living here sucks and once my section 8 comes through I won’t need him or anyone. I’ll be able to pay all my bills on my own.
Nice to see you James ♥️
Jackie xo
Nice to see you James ♥️
Jackie xo
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Dec 2023 8:45pm
26th Nov 2023 2:40am
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Re: Re. Wow
26th Nov 2023 4:49am
Hi Tim ltns :) Well it’s only thoughts so no worries .
Thanks for the read,
Jackie 🙂
Thanks for the read,
Jackie 🙂
Re. Wow
26th Nov 2023 6:31am
Dear J,
I’m sorry he had to be in the picture at all but I’m glad to read you have some resources becoming available and with any luck he’ll be out before you know it. I really appreciated how you’re dealing with it via your poem. H🌷
I’m sorry he had to be in the picture at all but I’m glad to read you have some resources becoming available and with any luck he’ll be out before you know it. I really appreciated how you’re dealing with it via your poem. H🌷
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Re: Re. Wow
15th Jan 2024 10:44pm
Sorry H, ♥️ I just saw this comment. I love you thanks for being in my corner.
Always
Jackie xoxo
Always
Jackie xoxo
Re. Wow
29th Nov 2023 4:14am
Re: Re. Wow
6th Dec 2023 11:36pm
Harry!♥️ I friggin love you dude♥️ I have missed you. We should chitchat sometime. Ima send you my number in a pm. You can always text me for free. Thanks for your support buddy. Love you.♥️
Jackie xoxox
Jackie xoxox
Re: Re. Wow
7th Dec 2023 6:00am
Re. Wow
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15th Jan 2024 10:45pm
Re. Wow
1st Jan 2024 6:35am
Re: Re. Wow
10th Mar 2024 2:44pm
Yeah it bees like that at times Lildragon-
Some days are better than others.
Thanks for looking sweet lady ♥️
Jackie xoxo
Some days are better than others.
Thanks for looking sweet lady ♥️
Jackie xoxo
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Jan 2025 8:45am
2nd Feb 2024 10:52pm
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Re: Re. Wow
10th Mar 2024 2:48pm
Yeah I have changed over the years. If I were younger like in my 20’s I would have roughed him up by now and removed him with flying cans of soup aimed at his head! 😂😂😂😂
Thanks for looking and commenting Dragonblood.
NTMY ☺️
Zazz
Thanks for looking and commenting Dragonblood.
NTMY ☺️
Zazz
Re. Wow
9th Mar 2024 2:03pm
Such a powerful piece, dear Zazzles.
I'm sorry you have to live with such an asshole, I hope by now he has left.
P.S You're not pathetic, anything but <3
I'm sorry you have to live with such an asshole, I hope by now he has left.
P.S You're not pathetic, anything but <3
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Re: Re. Wow
Hello beautiful Duende ♥️
such a treat to find you back here writing on DUP👍🏻 well, we all know I am a doomsday poet. It’s not as bad as it sounds all the time. These are just my feelings when I get mad for careless behavior from this guy.
Wonderful to see you ♥️
Jackie xoxo
such a treat to find you back here writing on DUP👍🏻 well, we all know I am a doomsday poet. It’s not as bad as it sounds all the time. These are just my feelings when I get mad for careless behavior from this guy.
Wonderful to see you ♥️
Jackie xoxo
Re. Wow
13th Mar 2024 3:56am
Re. Wow
17th Mar 2024 5:53pm
...sometimes we stay for selfish reasons, and end up prolonging the pain. Financial being at the top of the list. I rather be homeless than dead on the inside. I'm with Cipher O, I know the perfect place to bury him! 😉
Now, I'ma' need you to write some more! I missed your beautifully chaotic mind!
Now, I'ma' need you to write some more! I missed your beautifully chaotic mind!
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Re: Re. Wow
18th Mar 2024 2:00am
And I have missed yours too. So so happy to see you roaming the halls of DUP again Tara, i have always loved u sister ♥️
Jackie 😘
Jackie 😘
Re: Re. Wow
And yeah, it’s mostly financial reasons Tara. It’s all good . We get along most of the time but when we don’t ugh! I could just scream. I am happy thou, I moved to Gloucester Mass last year. It is so beautiful here nothing can keep me down. Not with 9 beaches mama.
Hola ♥️♥️♥️
Jackie xo
Hola ♥️♥️♥️
Jackie xo
Re: Re. Wow
18th Mar 2024 2:18am
Re. Wow
29th Mar 2024 11:39am
Re: Re. Wow
29th Mar 2024 1:33pm
I am well thanks for asking Grace. It’s nice to see you sweet lady. Last year I moved to Gloucester Mass a beach town, and am forever grateful. it’s beautiful here and the small town vibe feels very welcoming. How are you?