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Glove Compartment
I'll know everything I need to know
One look
Papers in order
No excess
What I would expect from you
So much beauty
Drips from your pores
Exquisite organization
Dark chocolate wrapper on back seat
Still human
One look
Papers in order
No excess
What I would expect from you
So much beauty
Drips from your pores
Exquisite organization
Dark chocolate wrapper on back seat
Still human
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Re. Glove Compartment
Anonymous
24th Nov 2023 8:08pm
All humans, regardless of beauty, come with a little mess

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24th Nov 2023 8:10pm
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Anonymous
24th Nov 2023 8:20pm
Couldn’t agree more. Besides, perfection can get boring. You need some mess in all that beauty to make it interesting.

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24th Nov 2023 8:21pm
Re. Glove Compartment
24th Nov 2023 11:45pm
The ending brings it all together. I like this one a lot
Now I'm all paranoid about the loveliness of my glove compartment...and try though I might, I prefer milk chocolate.
Now I'm all paranoid about the loveliness of my glove compartment...and try though I might, I prefer milk chocolate.
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Re: Re. Glove Compartment
25th Nov 2023 00:04am
All noted Pink
You never know when there will be a surprise inspection
Love milk chocolate but it gives me heartburn, confessions of a New York Jew.
Dark chocolate plays much better in me ...
Fun to write these little observations.
Glad you like 👍
You never know when there will be a surprise inspection
Love milk chocolate but it gives me heartburn, confessions of a New York Jew.
Dark chocolate plays much better in me ...
Fun to write these little observations.
Glad you like 👍
Re. Glove Compartment
25th Nov 2023 3:21am
Dear PS,
I enjoyed this animated list of traits that can be picked up by someone who cares enough to see them. You can learn a lot by observing the little things. Great write. H🌷
I enjoyed this animated list of traits that can be picked up by someone who cares enough to see them. You can learn a lot by observing the little things. Great write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Glove Compartment
25th Nov 2023 3:52am
Dear H,
In my line of work you are always looking for hints about people. Crosses over in poem writing too.
Appreciate the nod !
Thx
In my line of work you are always looking for hints about people. Crosses over in poem writing too.
Appreciate the nod !
Thx
Re. Glove Compartment
25th Nov 2023 1:57pm
Curious if the organization is a facet of the beauty or a bonus. If there isn't a bit of mess, I tend to mistrust the rest of the perfection just a bit.
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Re. Glove Compartment
That's a good point Willow.
I'm pretty casual about a lot of things but if I had a glove compartment I'd be anal about having only proper documents in there. My Mom was all about perfection and my Dad was about order, value and flair. I think in the years I'm in now I take more after him ...
I'm pretty casual about a lot of things but if I had a glove compartment I'd be anal about having only proper documents in there. My Mom was all about perfection and my Dad was about order, value and flair. I think in the years I'm in now I take more after him ...
Re. Glove Compartment
26th Nov 2023 12:57pm
I just wonder if anyone actually puts gloves in their glove compartment...? 🤔
Love this little snapshot poem. Great observer of humans.
❤️k
Love this little snapshot poem. Great observer of humans.
❤️k
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26th Nov 2023 2:35pm
Re. Glove Compartment
26th Nov 2023 6:05pm
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26th Nov 2023 8:01pm
Rig
One of my favorite words for many things mechanical...
Cars, bikes, electric guitars...
LIKE ML
One of my favorite words for many things mechanical...
Cars, bikes, electric guitars...
LIKE ML
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26th Nov 2023 8:28pm
Re. Glove Compartment
28th Nov 2023 5:56pm
My glove compartment is OCD organized. :p Only the necessary stuff... Driving documentation and owner's manual, registration and insurance cards. Everything neatly filed. You know me... My mind is chaotic but my glove compartment is the opposite. A wrapper on the back seat would drive me crazy though. Having sex on the back seat though, now that's definitely possible. (but you didn't mean that kind of wrapher did you. lol)
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28th Nov 2023 6:05pm
It's a poet's world ...anything is possible.
Not surprised by anything you said ...
License and registration please.
Not surprised by anything you said ...
License and registration please.
Re. Glove Compartment
28th Nov 2023 6:01pm
All humans have baggage we just have to learn to deal with it. Keep on writing.
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28th Nov 2023 6:06pm
Re. Glove Compartment
1st Dec 2023 4:10pm
Sometimes things get pr cluttered but it’s nice to have a balance of that minimalism and a couple of things that are extra
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1st Dec 2023 4:17pm
Re. Glove Compartment
17th Apr 2024 5:33pm
The end title got me. The wrapper at the end. Tight, right and out of sight. Have a great day PoetSpeak
Bat
Bat
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Re: Re. Glove Compartment
17th Apr 2024 5:41pm
This is a personal favorite of mine so I’m glad you got to to read it. Observation poems are fun to pen.
Thanks Bat !
Thanks Bat !