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A little less than AI
I just cant write today
though my head is abuzz
with words I want to say
saying them with pizzazz
my mind is writing
but my fingers are on strike
my imagination fills my dreaming
of a distant mountain hike
my thoughts turn to pie
with tasty chicken fillings
but make them, I wont lie
I am quite unwilling
my nails are done you see
and coloured dark lavender
they are so shiny and pretty
I wont ruin them ever.
though my head is abuzz
with words I want to say
saying them with pizzazz
my mind is writing
but my fingers are on strike
my imagination fills my dreaming
of a distant mountain hike
my thoughts turn to pie
with tasty chicken fillings
but make them, I wont lie
I am quite unwilling
my nails are done you see
and coloured dark lavender
they are so shiny and pretty
I wont ruin them ever.
Published 24th Nov 2023
Author's Note
Just thinking of AI and how using this apps can help tremendously in creating poems and prose. It is such a subject for debate nowadays. People use them or not doesn't really matter to me, but in competitions AI should not be used. Its not fair on those who wrote their poems from their hearts and soul. AI is flawless, but to me it has no soul. My two cents worth. Thank You for reading.
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25th Nov 2023 3:30am
Dear G,
Interesting perspective. I hear about this app and its capability and wonder why it’s come to this? I can’t quite make sense of it because I feel like writing, is something that comes from the imagination or experience of the writer. Not a computer. Having said that, who knows what I’d do if I actually understood anything from the 21st century. 🤔 I enjoyed your poem. 😊
H🌷
Interesting perspective. I hear about this app and its capability and wonder why it’s come to this? I can’t quite make sense of it because I feel like writing, is something that comes from the imagination or experience of the writer. Not a computer. Having said that, who knows what I’d do if I actually understood anything from the 21st century. 🤔 I enjoyed your poem. 😊
H🌷
25th Nov 2023 1:49pm
Dear H,
It does help to jazz up your words and give you words you want to say but don't know how. Interesting eh. Thank you for dropping by and reading. Appreciate you much.:)
Grace
It does help to jazz up your words and give you words you want to say but don't know how. Interesting eh. Thank you for dropping by and reading. Appreciate you much.:)
Grace
AI shouldn't be used because we don't if the machines will take over one day. Keep on writing.
29th Nov 2023 3:08pm
7th Jan 2024 6:15am
AI takes away the thrill of creation & the ego that goes with it (in my case, lol)
7th Jan 2024 6:49am
