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Whoosh

Sun rising, morning sky
another whoosh of air goes by
another pulse of rhythmic breathing
while waking up before leaving
 
a hypnagogic state of mind,
conscious of the rule of time
tick tock moments rushing by
another whoosh of air, a sigh
 
in the aether in between
electron's, proton's, neutron's stream
becoming all there is to view
smell, taste, feel, and listen to
 
as the sunshine's divine light
overcomes what was dark night
overcomes mind's blah blah blah
it seems close yet is so far
 
from tick tock tick tock tick tick tock
each whoosh of air's life giving shock
bringing wonder and too awe
giving living more and more
 
another whoosh of air goes by
tick tock moments rushing by
while waking up before leaving
another pulse of rhythmic breathing...
Written by bcpoet (Lawrence)
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