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Re. Suitcase
21st Nov 2023 11:55pm
Dang dude, and they say you never take them anywheres. This makes us think of something a little personal, tight work dude
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Re: Re. Suitcase
22nd Nov 2023 00:34am
A sudden thought became a poem.
I'll probably catch some grief.
Won't be the first time, certainly not the last ...
Thx ME
I'll probably catch some grief.
Won't be the first time, certainly not the last ...
Thx ME
Re. Suitcase
Anonymous
21st Nov 2023 11:58pm
I pack light. Be a jiffy!
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Re: Re. Suitcase
22nd Nov 2023 00:35am
Re. Suitcase
22nd Nov 2023 00:19am
Oh man, my friend always rolls his eyes because I take to long to do everything…
He says it’s because I’m a woman.
Then I give him that look
And he appreciates me even more.
He says it’s because I’m a woman.
Then I give him that look
And he appreciates me even more.
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Re: Re. Suitcase
22nd Nov 2023 00:35am
Re. Suitcase
22nd Nov 2023 1:22am
Re: Re. Suitcase
22nd Nov 2023 1:38am
Re. Suitcase
22nd Nov 2023 1:57am
hello dearest Poet I hope you have a fast car
hell has been breathing down my back...
this is beautiful thanks for being here 💕
hell has been breathing down my back...
this is beautiful thanks for being here 💕
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Re: Re. Suitcase
I actually haven't owned my own car in decades. City guy. But I have access to drivers who can get us anywhere... FAST
THX ❤
THX ❤
Re: Re. Suitcase
22nd Nov 2023 2:36am
Re: Re. Suitcase
22nd Nov 2023 2:40am
Not going anywhere..
It's 10 years now, digging in and exploring
a new ..
Thank you always 💓.
You were my first mentor here
It's 10 years now, digging in and exploring
a new ..
Thank you always 💓.
You were my first mentor here
Re: Re. Suitcase
22nd Nov 2023 2:43am
you have a unique style that is ever evolving...I appreciate that seems the art world does to as more poets are trying to capture what you have done time perfecting... you are ahead of the movement 💕
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As you would say..
Thank you graciously !!
I try to keep bringing new writing styles and art passages. I've been in a painting slump recently but dragged out my paints and tools and brushes and am attempting new art. I dreamt about discordant oranges and pinks and and weird lime greens. That painting is in process..
As I say
Stay tuned
Thanks Brenda....still and always
THE QUEEN OF DUP
👽💌🖤
Thank you graciously !!
I try to keep bringing new writing styles and art passages. I've been in a painting slump recently but dragged out my paints and tools and brushes and am attempting new art. I dreamt about discordant oranges and pinks and and weird lime greens. That painting is in process..
As I say
Stay tuned
Thanks Brenda....still and always
THE QUEEN OF DUP
👽💌🖤
Re. Suitcase
22nd Nov 2023 12:15pm
Solid and succinct. You reek of the city and that's a cologne I splash on every day.
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Re: Re. Suitcase
22nd Nov 2023 12:21pm
Ok Thor
So you get the rush rush aspect
Yeah
City Life is different
Make that light
Bolt fast sometimes
So you get the rush rush aspect
Yeah
City Life is different
Make that light
Bolt fast sometimes
Re. Suitcase
Anonymous
22nd Nov 2023 2:32pm
Nothing to pack. Go bag always on standby. Never keep someone waiting
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Re. Suitcase
22nd Nov 2023 3:27pm
Always have an emergency suitcase packed so you can be ready to go. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. Suitcase
22nd Nov 2023 4:25pm
Re. Suitcase
22nd Nov 2023 3:30pm
Take me anywhere...
Pack me, use me, take me.
In every way
I love time away
You will forget any delay
As I take you in the car ;)
Having just come back from a short trip, this one definitely brings many things to mind... Including those stops where you pull off the road somewhere hidden and really take everything in so to speak. :p
Pack me, use me, take me.
In every way
I love time away
You will forget any delay
As I take you in the car ;)
Having just come back from a short trip, this one definitely brings many things to mind... Including those stops where you pull off the road somewhere hidden and really take everything in so to speak. :p
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Have a feeling you're a fast packer.
Clothes thrown in bag
Won't be wearing them much with me around...
Let's get out of town and never look back ...
Clothes thrown in bag
Won't be wearing them much with me around...
Let's get out of town and never look back ...
Re. Suitcase
27th Nov 2023 10:27pm
The open road awaits
I like these short flashes of poetry. Open to interpretation and yet so relatable
I like these short flashes of poetry. Open to interpretation and yet so relatable
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Re: Re. Suitcase
27th Nov 2023 11:14pm
I'm enjoying writing the short format.
People are getting into them, it's different and fun
People are getting into them, it's different and fun