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Never love
Sadness dwells then wells within
my melancholy waters run deep
awash in the hurt I cry
while tears go unnoticed
My soul keening
coming into the realization I was never loved
A never love
has captured my fascination
enough so to make God jealous
Published 20th Nov 2023
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20th Nov 2023 4:08pm
This feels like sitting alone in a dark room.
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(i assumed the second word in line five is ‘soul’?)
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(i assumed the second word in line five is ‘soul’?)
20th Nov 2023 4:26pm
20th Nov 2023 4:45pm
“ my melancholy waters run deep”
I liked the way this phrased, it conveys how deep emotions go
I liked the way this phrased, it conveys how deep emotions go
