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Breakfast with You
Everyday
Breakfast
Have it with you
We discuss berries
Yours are exotic
Mine, pedestrian
Best time of the day
Breakfast
Have it with you
We discuss berries
Yours are exotic
Mine, pedestrian
Best time of the day
Author's Note
Pass the almond milk please ..
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Re. Breakfast with You
20th Nov 2023 1:28pm
Niiiiiiiiice. You keep spilling all these beautiful love poems. It’s very lovely and refreshing.
Exotic and pedestrian can mix well. I have an ex was Thai and a chef. Everything about him was exotic. I am quite American and pedestrian. We balanced each other. It was a beautiful season in my life.
Exotic and pedestrian can mix well. I have an ex was Thai and a chef. Everything about him was exotic. I am quite American and pedestrian. We balanced each other. It was a beautiful season in my life.
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20th Nov 2023 1:37pm
I kind of ran out of stuff to redeem myself for so I mixed in everyday conversations...
Opposites can attract quite well.
You've had varied relationships. BIG LIKE
Thx Mary
Opposites can attract quite well.
You've had varied relationships. BIG LIKE
Thx Mary
Re. Breakfast with You
Anonymous
20th Nov 2023 1:32pm
Blackberries and strawberries over here please
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Re: Re. Breakfast with You
20th Nov 2023 1:38pm
You're close to my fruit mantra BB.
Blackberries and raspberries.
I find blackberries to be erotic ..
Blackberries and raspberries.
I find blackberries to be erotic ..
Re. Breakfast with You
20th Nov 2023 1:46pm
Pedestrian berries, huh? I think I've heard it all now, lol! I love how you throw words together, always extracting an exciting mix from the everyday mundane. 😋
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20th Nov 2023 2:10pm
I'm taking that as a massive compliment Billy because that's exactly what I do often.
Take the Mundane and make something out it. .... I'm designing conversation...
Thx
Take the Mundane and make something out it. .... I'm designing conversation...
Thx
Re. Breakfast with You
20th Nov 2023 2:07pm
Don't usually have breakfast myself. Cup of coffee & maybe a bagel. Leaves more berries for you!
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Re: Re. Breakfast with You
20th Nov 2023 2:11pm
Yes, I want all the berries..
Keeps everything moving
Appreciate your kindness
Keeps everything moving
Appreciate your kindness
Re. Breakfast with You
20th Nov 2023 2:14pm
My breakfasts are unconventional, and always a solo project these days. Maybe some day my breakfast will include the romance of casual conversation...
(Wild Nova Scotia blueberries for me, of course! Definitely not exotic around here.)
❤️k
(Wild Nova Scotia blueberries for me, of course! Definitely not exotic around here.)
❤️k
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Re: Re. Breakfast with You
20th Nov 2023 2:28pm
I like breakfast a lot
Sometimes I eat weird combos but almost always involves a fruit product.
Maybe that's why I'm so sweet ??
🍉🍎🍒💯
Sometimes I eat weird combos but almost always involves a fruit product.
Maybe that's why I'm so sweet ??
🍉🍎🍒💯
Re. Breakfast with You
20th Nov 2023 7:25pm
Pedestrian and exotic are the same berries in different places. Enjoy the intertwining moment. Happy breakfast!
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Re: Re. Breakfast with You
20th Nov 2023 8:02pm
Thank you Sir Thor
We have that conversation often, both of our views don't change..
It's kind of amusing in a strange way ..
We have that conversation often, both of our views don't change..
It's kind of amusing in a strange way ..
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20th Nov 2023 8:12pm
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20th Nov 2023 8:17pm
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20th Nov 2023 9:07pm
the shifting intricacies of the sky.
The laughter after the silence.
regards
The laughter after the silence.
regards
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20th Nov 2023 9:11pm
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21st Nov 2023 1:58am
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21st Nov 2023 2:00am
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21st Nov 2023 2:02am
After you eat the strawberries from her pussy then you eat her out to orgasmic bliss.
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Re. Breakfast with You
Anonymous
21st Nov 2023 1:15pm
Nice little snapshot of intimacy. Minimalism is underrated for love poems. You do that genre really well.
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Re: Re. Breakfast with You
21st Nov 2023 2:23pm
It's a little bit of ee Cummings, whom I admire...
There's a lot of intimacy in the everyday if allowed to express it ..
Appreciate your observations always Pink !
There's a lot of intimacy in the everyday if allowed to express it ..
Appreciate your observations always Pink !
Re. Breakfast with You
23rd Nov 2023 10:24am
Dear PS,
Only you could make breakfast so romantic. I loved the closeness and intimacy in this piece. BIG BREAKFAST DIG! 😊
H🌷
Only you could make breakfast so romantic. I loved the closeness and intimacy in this piece. BIG BREAKFAST DIG! 😊
H🌷
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Re. Breakfast with You
23rd Nov 2023 1:14pm
Dear H,
If you can get the Blackberries in season, they become da bomb !
Worth a try and romance is still # 1
Thx ❤
If you can get the Blackberries in season, they become da bomb !
Worth a try and romance is still # 1
Thx ❤
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27th Nov 2023 2:27pm
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27th Nov 2023 3:21pm