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Ripped Open & Raw
You peer in
And recoil in horror
I lay gushing
You turn your back
And run
Never realizing
That it was you
Who bludgeoned me
And recoil in horror
I lay gushing
You turn your back
And run
Never realizing
That it was you
Who bludgeoned me
Published 19th Nov 2023
| Edited 20th Nov 2023
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20th Nov 2023 00:04am
Bludgeon is a fav word of mine.
I felt the pain. Great description.
Your poetry bludgeons my mind with pleasure. 😊
I felt the pain. Great description.
Your poetry bludgeons my mind with pleasure. 😊
20th Nov 2023 11:06am
20th Nov 2023 1:10pm
Oh, Her, this one is painful. We've all been in this place once and you expressed it perfectly. Sending you sunshine for your sorrow
20th Nov 2023 1:13pm
20th Nov 2023 9:52pm
Ouch...I swear I've been on that floor bleeding along with you a time or 2. It's definitely like being bludgeoned.
20th Nov 2023 9:56pm
Yeahhhhhhhh. You’d think by now I’d be numb to the pain. But for as crazy as it sounds, I’d rather feel all the pain than be numb.
21st Nov 2023 3:55am
21st Nov 2023 3:58am
