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I am just a woman.....
I am just a woman, trying to make it to the end
I am full of hope and love
Yet I am fearful and terrified
I am lots of things I see everyday
when I look in the mirror
I am a mother
a lover
a giver
a listener
a wife
a homemaker
a big time talker
a nurturer
a smoker
a drinker
a dancer
a bank
a taxi
a chef
a boss
a lady
a hard worker
a music lover
a slave to myself
One day itll all be over and I can say I lived my life to the fullest every long yet beautiful day....
I am full of hope and love
Yet I am fearful and terrified
I am lots of things I see everyday
when I look in the mirror
I am a mother
a lover
a giver
a listener
a wife
a homemaker
a big time talker
a nurturer
a smoker
a drinker
a dancer
a bank
a taxi
a chef
a boss
a lady
a hard worker
a music lover
a slave to myself
One day itll all be over and I can say I lived my life to the fullest every long yet beautiful day....
Published 18th Nov 2023
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18th Nov 2023 2:36am
I like to puff the weed once in a while, I gave up cigs 12 years ago! Thank PS. I am woman, hear me rawr! <3 Thanks for the prefect compliment and rl add babe!
18th Nov 2023 3:02am
Dear ML,
Magnificent. The every woman poem. I loved the closing. The gratitude for what was accomplished and the appreciation of what was given is a wonderful reminder. Lovely piece. H🌷
Magnificent. The every woman poem. I loved the closing. The gratitude for what was accomplished and the appreciation of what was given is a wonderful reminder. Lovely piece. H🌷
18th Nov 2023 3:04am
I always smile when I see you stopped in. Thank you so much for always supporting me and my words! Thanks for rl add and for this beautiful comment. <3
18th Nov 2023 3:10am
Great piece, we should all realize the different rolls we all play simply by being human. We have several females friends that would applaud this, tight work Lady
18th Nov 2023 3:11am
Thanks, love. I should have added in this one that I not only a woman, but I al also just a human. <3
18th Nov 2023 10:41am
A detailed poem about the role of women in our lives
If women had not been found on earth, life would not have continued
Your writing is wonderful and shows the value of women with their positivity and negativity
Balanced writing and great Rhythm
Enjoy reading your poem
I salute all women in the media for your poem
If women had not been found on earth, life would not have continued
Your writing is wonderful and shows the value of women with their positivity and negativity
Balanced writing and great Rhythm
Enjoy reading your poem
I salute all women in the media for your poem
18th Nov 2023 1:44pm
18th Nov 2023 11:05am
Not just a woman, but a WOMAN. We wear many hats, some more than others.
The closing line is the icing on the cake. I’m in love with this poem.
The closing line is the icing on the cake. I’m in love with this poem.
18th Nov 2023 1:44pm
18th Nov 2023 3:04pm
The self affirmations in this really magnify the fact...you are far more than "just a woman"...you're a masterpiece that's never quite complete...always improving as you go 😊
20th Nov 2023 9:57pm
26th Nov 2023 7:35pm
Outstanding girl, you said a handful!♥️
I am stunned with the ending. When it’s over you won’t know, and while you are still here it will never be over because those who you love love you back, and will never leave you alone. ♥️♥️♥️🥰
Love Jackie xo
I am stunned with the ending. When it’s over you won’t know, and while you are still here it will never be over because those who you love love you back, and will never leave you alone. ♥️♥️♥️🥰
Love Jackie xo
26th Nov 2023 8:15pm
28th Dec 2023 1:54am
So basically you're "All That" and a poet on the sly!?
We all should see our worth more often. There's nothing wrong in realising that we do matter. Because we do.
You wrote it out as a tribute to all, even if you're the subject. Because it's an affirming piece that we all can look into and hope for such a reflection.
We all should see our worth more often. There's nothing wrong in realising that we do matter. Because we do.
You wrote it out as a tribute to all, even if you're the subject. Because it's an affirming piece that we all can look into and hope for such a reflection.
28th Dec 2023 6:09am
This comment made my year, honey. For real. Ive been struggling, and this was exactly what I needed to read when I logged in just now. Thanks sweetie. <3
You are so correct! We matter. <3
You are so correct! We matter. <3
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18th Apr 2024 6:20am
Love it. You know who you are and you own it and relish it. Doesn't get much better than that.
18th Apr 2024 6:22am
