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Bar Life

Why yes, I can spare you a dime for that old jukebox
push B3 "I can help, I have two strong arms" Billy Swan sings
next to the doors labeled “Pointers” and “Setters”
while my little sister and I play on the stairs of this old bar  
filled with swirling smoke and drunken men
watching the miniature elevator go up and down
hearing the pool balls smack as they race towards empty pockets
as we wait for our favorite candy bars and soda pop
from the bartender who is my grandmother laughing, smiling,  
flirting with all the drunken men in the bar.
Written by jmcchesnie (Joylyn)
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Author's Note
Inspired by the poem "Unraveled Ravens" by Adagio and some childhood memories
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