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Loss
Losing you
Was like
Losing the warmth
Of sunlight,
Losing the Autumn
In the leaves,
But most of all
Losing you
Was losing
A great part of me
Was like
Losing the warmth
Of sunlight,
Losing the Autumn
In the leaves,
But most of all
Losing you
Was losing
A great part of me
Published 12th Nov 2023
Author's Note
Oh, how I loved you
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12th Nov 2023 11:39am
They do become the other half of us. I often felt like I was not only walking around empty inside, but like I had an arm or leg missing.
I like the way you formatted the poem. The breaks made more of an impact. I find that I really like that with your work.
I like the way you formatted the poem. The breaks made more of an impact. I find that I really like that with your work.
12th Nov 2023 2:15pm
13th Nov 2023 3:56am
Dear TMW,
Your lovely poem has caught me out and I find I’m very emotional. It has all the elements of a relationship I still haven’t let go and it’s amazing how the human psyche can do that. Terrific writing. H🌷
Your lovely poem has caught me out and I find I’m very emotional. It has all the elements of a relationship I still haven’t let go and it’s amazing how the human psyche can do that. Terrific writing. H🌷
13th Nov 2023 6:56am
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