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Liquid Gold
Our color was predestined
From the beginning of time
An armada of femininity
Behind each of our eyes
Resonate and radiate
Nurture our womanly glamour
As we design our golden age
With untarnished beauty
Bestow future legacies
Of mothers and daughters
With precious liquified metal
Our wisdom will never rust
Teaching love’s glory
Between woman and man
Penmanship forever lasting
Never smudged or cold
As we pour priceless treasure
From our legendary hearts
Elegance combined with
Shining strength
Writing in Liquid Gold
From the beginning of time
An armada of femininity
Behind each of our eyes
Resonate and radiate
Nurture our womanly glamour
As we design our golden age
With untarnished beauty
Bestow future legacies
Of mothers and daughters
With precious liquified metal
Our wisdom will never rust
Teaching love’s glory
Between woman and man
Penmanship forever lasting
Never smudged or cold
As we pour priceless treasure
From our legendary hearts
Elegance combined with
Shining strength
Writing in Liquid Gold
Author's Note
I'm very close with my mother. She taught me everything I know
about self respect and confidence.
I remember watching her put on her make-up on when I was younger.
It was like magic. hahaha
Wrote while listening to
Grouplove - Colours
https://youtu.be/FxngHusQN2g
about self respect and confidence.
I remember watching her put on her make-up on when I was younger.
It was like magic. hahaha
Wrote while listening to
Grouplove - Colours
https://youtu.be/FxngHusQN2g
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Re. Liquid Gold
11th Nov 2023 2:26am
Re: Re. Liquid Gold
11th Nov 2023 2:44am
Thanks Meme!
Just wanted to write something about
how I was taught by my mom.
She spoiled me then would ground me the next hour. LOL
Just wanted to write something about
how I was taught by my mom.
She spoiled me then would ground me the next hour. LOL
Re. Liquid Gold
11th Nov 2023 2:36am
I lost my mum 18 years ago this week
She was my everything.
Beautiful memories
Love and light
Ron x
She was my everything.
Beautiful memories
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. Liquid Gold
11th Nov 2023 2:48am
Hey Joe
I'm so sorry to hear that.
They live in us amigo:)
I wanted to celebrate them with some
beauty and glam. They deserve it!
My mom's getting older.
I see her struggle to get around and how she gets tired
easily. She's a powerhouse though. Smart and witty to
this day!
Thanks for stopping by lovely light
I'm so sorry to hear that.
They live in us amigo:)
I wanted to celebrate them with some
beauty and glam. They deserve it!
My mom's getting older.
I see her struggle to get around and how she gets tired
easily. She's a powerhouse though. Smart and witty to
this day!
Thanks for stopping by lovely light
Re. Liquid Gold
Your mom raised you to be the beautiful sexy woman you are today. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. Liquid Gold
11th Nov 2023 2:51am
Re. Liquid Gold
11th Nov 2023 4:51am
Dear A,
I did the same thing. Watching my mother with the foundation and the blush and the mascara. When I was finally old enough I remember swiping her eyelash curler. Beautiful association in learning and the closeness before attaining that rite of passage. H🌷
I did the same thing. Watching my mother with the foundation and the blush and the mascara. When I was finally old enough I remember swiping her eyelash curler. Beautiful association in learning and the closeness before attaining that rite of passage. H🌷
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Re: Re. Liquid Gold
Hi H!
My mom had Mary Kay makeup when I was younger. I remember
watching her put on her eyeshadow. Then she would order from Avon. I loved looking at those ordering book!! Still do actually:)
We would also do each others hair
when I got older. Not always with great results. hahaha
Good times:)
Thanks for stopping by you eyelash curling bandit!! hehehe
Love ya chica:))
My mom had Mary Kay makeup when I was younger. I remember
watching her put on her eyeshadow. Then she would order from Avon. I loved looking at those ordering book!! Still do actually:)
We would also do each others hair
when I got older. Not always with great results. hahaha
Good times:)
Thanks for stopping by you eyelash curling bandit!! hehehe
Love ya chica:))
Re. Liquid Gold
11th Nov 2023 7:37am
Re: Re. Liquid Gold
13th Nov 2023 00:02am
Hi Cipher:)
If I got your soul to smile - mission accomplished!!
That made my soul do a happy dance:))))
Thanks for stopping by buddy!
If I got your soul to smile - mission accomplished!!
That made my soul do a happy dance:))))
Thanks for stopping by buddy!
Re. Liquid Gold
11th Nov 2023 10:48am
I don't have this kind of relationship with my mother, but I do with my daughter. Beautifully captured here!
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Re: Re. Liquid Gold
13th Nov 2023 00:08am
Hi Willow
You are very blessed to have that kind of relationship with your daughter.
I remember when I was younger, in middle school. All my female friends
loved my mom. We all would sit in the kitchen while my mom was making tortillas and just talk - about everything. Girls only!!
My mom always gave the best advice and she's super funny:))
Thanks for your snaps on this
and the RL!
You are very blessed to have that kind of relationship with your daughter.
I remember when I was younger, in middle school. All my female friends
loved my mom. We all would sit in the kitchen while my mom was making tortillas and just talk - about everything. Girls only!!
My mom always gave the best advice and she's super funny:))
Thanks for your snaps on this
and the RL!
Re. Liquid Gold
12th Nov 2023 7:18pm
Me, having a bit of personal knowledge about your mom, and talking with her, I can attest to her strengths that carried over to you. I admire her for that. As well as you.
Your write is an example of how you think. The creative processes are all you, your individuality. But the class and self dignity, and femininity, are traits absorbed by your upbringing. She did a great job.
And you are an incredible woman.
Awesome tribute write. Your spirit shines in it .
Your write is an example of how you think. The creative processes are all you, your individuality. But the class and self dignity, and femininity, are traits absorbed by your upbringing. She did a great job.
And you are an incredible woman.
Awesome tribute write. Your spirit shines in it .
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Re: Re. Liquid Gold
13th Nov 2023 00:17am
Hey Sweetie,
Thank you for that:)
We were arguing the other day and I told
her - "And to think I just wrote a poem about mother and daughters"
And she said - "well, see cause you know I'm always right!"
Ughhhhhh - I walked into it!! LOL
Wait until you actually meet her in person. Prepare yourself!!
She might bust on ya. hahaha
All in good humor though.
She's going to love you:)))
Thank you for that:)
We were arguing the other day and I told
her - "And to think I just wrote a poem about mother and daughters"
And she said - "well, see cause you know I'm always right!"
Ughhhhhh - I walked into it!! LOL
Wait until you actually meet her in person. Prepare yourself!!
She might bust on ya. hahaha
All in good humor though.
She's going to love you:)))
Re. Liquid Gold
20th Nov 2023 3:11am
This is awesome! I love how gold is a recurring theme through the poem but in a subtle, inobtrusive way. Overall, this is a poem of justified pride and beauty, not to mention a very fitting tribute to your mom. It was my pleasure to read such an accomplished poem.
Mundus
Mundus
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Re: Re. Liquid Gold
1st Dec 2023 2:46am
Hey Mun:)
Thanks for the awesome comment. hahaha
What can I say - I love the glam of being female. All the
color and attitude. LOL
My mom is a rock star. She's super funny and sweet but at the same
time she'll put you in your place. She's not a shy person - very strong in her convictions. She gave me great advice when I dated at a younger age that's carried over into adulthood.
Best advice ever!
listen to what they do - not what they say
It could be great advice for men as well.
Actions always speak louder than words.
Thanks for stopping by!
Thanks for the awesome comment. hahaha
What can I say - I love the glam of being female. All the
color and attitude. LOL
My mom is a rock star. She's super funny and sweet but at the same
time she'll put you in your place. She's not a shy person - very strong in her convictions. She gave me great advice when I dated at a younger age that's carried over into adulthood.
Best advice ever!
listen to what they do - not what they say
It could be great advice for men as well.
Actions always speak louder than words.
Thanks for stopping by!
Re. Liquid Gold
6th Dec 2023 11:54pm
Wish I had this kind of relationship with my mother... nicely penned...
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7th Dec 2023 00:13am