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Whispering Tunes To Marionettes (w/adagio)
At twilight as I lay down to rest
to a soul dance's bye and bye,
I sway to gentle rhythmic tunes
of crickets chirping nature's lullaby.
They whisper tunes to marionettes,
a sweet requiem song, goodnight,
I listen to the angels harp,
counting sheep as I would might.
But my eyelids see the creatures
that once were the pale corpses,
now a psalm is in my shadows,
one that strips my endorphins.
I walk through villages of death,
strolling through purgatory's entice,
sweet dreams turned to nightmares,
this unbled cranium won't suffice.
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9th Nov 2023 1:35pm
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9th Nov 2023 1:38pm
i love this it doesn't seem like a poem its more like all your thoughts bunched to gether!! its awsome!! i love it !
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9th Nov 2023 7:20pm
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Anonymous
9th Nov 2023 2:03pm
Awesome collab.
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16th Nov 2023 7:30pm
I love this poem, and I love crickets chirping. They are my sleeping aids!
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19th Nov 2023 6:05am
Many people get irritated by their sound. To me, it's very soothing. I use those YouTube videos of crickets chirping to help me fall asleep. And I also love sitting out at night listening to them.
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