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Leave.
Located in an older isolated building.
A cold breeze, breathing In the air.
The room is charged.
You can sense it.
Then
A sound moves an empty chair.
Nothing is here..
Cold be an over active imagination.
Not likely.
Physically, something was here.
Then suddenly,like blown dust.
It disappeared,
As if never here.
In an isolated building,
On your own, totally scared.
But shouldn't be.
As there's nothing here.
©SukiSushiCrown. 8-11-2023
A cold breeze, breathing In the air.
The room is charged.
You can sense it.
Then
A sound moves an empty chair.
Nothing is here..
Cold be an over active imagination.
Not likely.
Physically, something was here.
Then suddenly,like blown dust.
It disappeared,
As if never here.
In an isolated building,
On your own, totally scared.
But shouldn't be.
As there's nothing here.
©SukiSushiCrown. 8-11-2023
Published 8th Nov 2023
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8th Nov 2023 11:17pm
I like it:)
Gently unsettling, and giving a good sense of unease. Perhaps not a a good idea to read this before going to sleep ;)
Perhaps a small typo „cold” instead of “could”, but “cold” works kinda well anyway.
Gently unsettling, and giving a good sense of unease. Perhaps not a a good idea to read this before going to sleep ;)
Perhaps a small typo „cold” instead of “could”, but “cold” works kinda well anyway.
8th Nov 2023 11:47pm
Yeah, so I read this while alone, in silence and immediately turned on the tv for some background noise.
This totally creeped me out. Good writing does that…
This totally creeped me out. Good writing does that…
