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Wedded War-Fare
Walking on eggshell covered land mines
Diving from vicious verbal hand-grenades
Tripped by barbed accusatory wire
Soul-searching spotlight stare
Elocutionary Intimidatory Detonations
Picked off with point-blank protestations
Brought low with bombastic bullshit
Cut down by cynical criticism
Child enforced ceasefire cessation
Snarling, sharp, spiteful speech
Offspring usurped into open offensive
Negating natural neutrality
Scornful sardonic sniping
Vehement, violent verbal volleys
Dug-in defensive disinclination
Attacking allegations admitted
Caustically cutting castration
Manhood mauled malevolently
Impaled by imaginary implications
Fatal flawed fuelled frenzy
Detached divorce declarations
Reinforced repelling representations
Entrapping tear-jerking testimony
Psychological suffered suicidal surrender
Diving from vicious verbal hand-grenades
Tripped by barbed accusatory wire
Soul-searching spotlight stare
Elocutionary Intimidatory Detonations
Picked off with point-blank protestations
Brought low with bombastic bullshit
Cut down by cynical criticism
Child enforced ceasefire cessation
Snarling, sharp, spiteful speech
Offspring usurped into open offensive
Negating natural neutrality
Scornful sardonic sniping
Vehement, violent verbal volleys
Dug-in defensive disinclination
Attacking allegations admitted
Caustically cutting castration
Manhood mauled malevolently
Impaled by imaginary implications
Fatal flawed fuelled frenzy
Detached divorce declarations
Reinforced repelling representations
Entrapping tear-jerking testimony
Psychological suffered suicidal surrender
Published 25th Apr 2012
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25th Apr 2012 11:34am
Love the use of alliteration, it works so well for this poem. The anger's evident, the way you've written it makes every word drip with it. Love it!! Thanks for sharing :)
LadyLoss
LadyLoss
30th Apr 2012 2:58am
This Is outstanding!
did I mention you need to be published with your own book
your vocabulary is astounding!
Love this
I feel the anger and angst in it
great write !
did I mention you need to be published with your own book
your vocabulary is astounding!
Love this
I feel the anger and angst in it
great write !
