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the moon
last
night
the
velvet skinned moon
descended
to bathe
in a fragrant canyon
filled with rose petals,
seeing her
the stars
turned red
with shame
dampness
spread in the air
the waves
of the sea shone
like amber gold
and the moon
of the sky
broke in half
and started floating
on the waves like rippled cotton...
night
the
velvet skinned moon
descended
to bathe
in a fragrant canyon
filled with rose petals,
seeing her
the stars
turned red
with shame
dampness
spread in the air
the waves
of the sea shone
like amber gold
and the moon
of the sky
broke in half
and started floating
on the waves like rippled cotton...
Published 26th Oct 2023
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26th Oct 2023 6:49am
26th Oct 2023 10:13am
Rhyming comment:
Oh, hush-hush!
She makes the stars blush!
Au naturel
and swathed with petal.
Oh, hush-hush!
She makes the stars blush!
Au naturel
and swathed with petal.
26th Oct 2023 10:13am
26th Oct 2023 7:14am
This is so sensual and surreal.
Your metaphors really moves this vibe
Much respect
Naaj
Your metaphors really moves this vibe
Much respect
Naaj
26th Oct 2023 10:15am
26th Oct 2023 7:43am
So delicate so sensual brilliant absolutely beautiful
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
26th Oct 2023 10:17am
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26th Oct 2023 4:03pm
You are glistening In the moonlight. We are both so turn on that you that we decided to make sweet sweet passionate love in the moonlight. Keep on writing my sexy lady.
27th Oct 2023 5:44am
27th Oct 2023 6:03am
You are really innocent lol!!!
that you don't know about the velvet skinned moon.
that you don't know about the velvet skinned moon.
27th Oct 2023 6:33am
27th Oct 2023 8:14am
3rd Nov 2023 8:37am
Oh to be a star witnessing the parting of two halves of the moon...
How could all the stars not want to form a meteor shower sprinkling down in your bath after witnessing that? A shooting star I would gladly be...
JJ
How could all the stars not want to form a meteor shower sprinkling down in your bath after witnessing that? A shooting star I would gladly be...
JJ
3rd Nov 2023 1:04pm
3rd Nov 2023 1:38pm
3rd Nov 2023 2:23pm
Yyaaay it's a little hot... and I know it's going to get hotter.. will burn body...
3rd Nov 2023 2:35pm
3rd Nov 2023 2:39pm
3rd Nov 2023 4:31pm
I am curious about your name, Dimpy and Dimpsmoon.
There must be a meaning behind that. You have dimples? Dimples on your moon??? Lol
My mind never stops thinking the worst, or best, depending on your perspective...
JJ
There must be a meaning behind that. You have dimples? Dimples on your moon??? Lol
My mind never stops thinking the worst, or best, depending on your perspective...
JJ
3rd Nov 2023 4:58pm
3rd Nov 2023 5:25pm
How can you tell if the are BEHIND you?
Hehehe...
Perhaps we should be having this conversation in PM's. Lol
JJ
Hehehe...
Perhaps we should be having this conversation in PM's. Lol
JJ
