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Liquid Luscious

pitter patter liquid chatter
rain falls down to splash
on the rooftops raindrops splatter
where they fall and crash

flowing downwards rain then rushes
drawn by gravity
liquid luscious water gushes
back towards the sea

intermingling with rain's sprinkling
chaotically it's joined
with tumbling, rumbling raindrops crumbling
sounds like words seem coined

coalescing liquid blessing
falling from the sky
pitter patter liquid chatter
mumbling from on high

as liquid luscious water gushes
back towards the sea
evaporating it then rushes
back to you and me

where liquid luscious water gushes
drawn by gravity
flowing downwards rain then rushes
back towards the sea...
Written by bcpoet (Lawrence)
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