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Forbidden...
Put me in front of a fact today!
Come like thunder, like lightning, without asking.
Don't be like everyone else, but be my intermission!
Both before and after, without asking a question.
Don't ask me what I like about pleasures,
And do EVERYTHING, not saying a word, not saying.
And this is certainly the key to success,
Spontaneity generates a storm of lava.
You don't need these "Can I?" or "Do you want?"!
With me, go ahead be direct and specific.
Without parentheses, commas and ellipses,
I love everything that can be forbidden!
Come like thunder, like lightning, without asking.
Don't be like everyone else, but be my intermission!
Both before and after, without asking a question.
Don't ask me what I like about pleasures,
And do EVERYTHING, not saying a word, not saying.
And this is certainly the key to success,
Spontaneity generates a storm of lava.
You don't need these "Can I?" or "Do you want?"!
With me, go ahead be direct and specific.
Without parentheses, commas and ellipses,
I love everything that can be forbidden!
Author's Note
Sometimes you just have to say it like that... ;)
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Re. Forbidden...
10th Oct 2023 11:52pm
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11th Oct 2023 00:10am
You know it BC, total abandon is the best! I need someone to just... * nevermind, naughty look * lol
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11th Oct 2023 00:11am
Hell yes for Spontaneity! Prometheus. I am sure the god that stole fire knows how to set things ablaze. ;)
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11th Oct 2023 00:46am
Re. Forbidden...
10th Oct 2023 11:57pm
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11th Oct 2023 00:11am
Always, I can't contain the lust beast. It rules me in so many ways. Sometimes makes things hard to get done, but at least it always makes things hard. lol
Re. Forbidden...
11th Oct 2023 00:28am
condemn me in your hollow spaces
I will ravage your damnation
lick your ravenous zones
assault my gentleness
with a crave of your own
push past my barriers
and know me...
love this lady...
I will ravage your damnation
lick your ravenous zones
assault my gentleness
with a crave of your own
push past my barriers
and know me...
love this lady...
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Re: Re. Forbidden...
11th Oct 2023 1:01am
Damn, I need a cold shower...
Well I won't say what I really need. lol Shhh...
Fill my hollow spaces...
Is this our curse or salvation?
Make me your altar.
and I will open you wide.
sacrifice your gentleness...
for my depraved need.
to know every part.
...
Well I won't say what I really need. lol Shhh...
Fill my hollow spaces...
Is this our curse or salvation?
Make me your altar.
and I will open you wide.
sacrifice your gentleness...
for my depraved need.
to know every part.
...
Re: Re. Forbidden...
11th Oct 2023 1:37am
I was once told by a chick that she hated being asked if it was ok if I could kiss her. Guess what? I asked her, didn't I? (It was nerves, I think). Needless to say, half an hour later she was out my door! She said she had a headache. We never even got naked. But she did get a fixed penalty notice fine from Hounslow Council for driving on a pedestrian road. It cost her £60. It was my fault though cos I directed her up that road (not intentionally). I was okay with that though. True story! ;-)
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Re: Re. Forbidden...
11th Oct 2023 1:48pm
Yes, I can understand that. But it takes the spontaneity and excitement out of it. Oh no, not the headache excuse and not getting naked is disappointing. (the best remedy to a headache is having something intense to feel elsewhere if you ask me) And haha... no comment on the pedestrian road. We all have stories don't we. ;)
Re. Forbidden...
11th Oct 2023 1:41am
Letting the action do the talking for you!!
I enjoy a take charge kind of moment or hours. LOL
Anything forbidden is ten times more tempting and gratifying afterwards.
It's empowering:)
Glad to see ya posting again Kristina!!
So lovely to read you)
I enjoy a take charge kind of moment or hours. LOL
Anything forbidden is ten times more tempting and gratifying afterwards.
It's empowering:)
Glad to see ya posting again Kristina!!
So lovely to read you)
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Re: Re. Forbidden...
11th Oct 2023 1:55pm
Absolutely, the action can speak louder than words for sure. ;)
Those take charge moments can lead to hours... just like we like it.
Hell yes it is! It's always fun to be the bad girl. lol
Thanks Adel, that means a lot to me. I always love seeing your comments. :)
Those take charge moments can lead to hours... just like we like it.
Hell yes it is! It's always fun to be the bad girl. lol
Thanks Adel, that means a lot to me. I always love seeing your comments. :)
Re. Forbidden...
11th Oct 2023 2:29am
That's hot. You need to be given pleasure all over your sexy naked body. We will be creating new positions until your sexy naked body feels good and loose.
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11th Oct 2023 1:59pm
Oh yes! Absolutely need pleasure all over... ;) And what could be more fun than writing your own Kama Sutra. So many awkward positions to try. lol And not to loose though. ;)
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You will be having a shaking orgasm over and over again from all the pleasure he's giving you.
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Anonymous
11th Oct 2023 2:45am
Amen, sister!
Nothing like being direct. Works every time.
Nothing like being direct. Works every time.
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Re: Re. Forbidden...
11th Oct 2023 2:52pm
Damn right Mary! ;)
It can be very hard to resist someone who knows what he wants and isn't afraid to act on it. That definitely has a way of getting things going doesn't it? ;)
It can be very hard to resist someone who knows what he wants and isn't afraid to act on it. That definitely has a way of getting things going doesn't it? ;)
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This site is a damn sight better when KristinaX is back in town !
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Re: Re. Forbidden...
11th Oct 2023 2:56pm
Aw, thank you so much for the sentiment PS, it means a lot to me! I hope I can make things better somehow. :) As always, I love the BIG LIKE.
Re. Forbidden...
11th Oct 2023 3:32am
Sensual and Sexy at it's finest moment 👍🤗👏... SHAMAN III/ WOLF BAY 33 📿♀️🪷🙏
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11th Oct 2023 2:58pm
Oh yes, what a sensual and sexy moment it is indeed! That incredible buildup of excitement of what comes next. Mmmm I love it!
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11th Oct 2023 7:41pm
Thanks for the wonderful comment DEAR POETESS AND QUEEN 👍👑 I'M A FIRM BELIEVER IF YOU AIN'T GONNA DO IT RIGHT🤫 DON'T DO IT AT ALL AS IT IS FORBIDDEN LIKE FIRE🔥FROM UPON A SCENTED BURNING CANDLE ON FLAME🔥🔥🔥📿♀️🪷🤫.
SHAMAN III
SHAMAN III
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Re: Re. Forbidden...
12th Oct 2023 12:16pm
Ah the smell of a scented candle is so sweet. And the feeling of the flame can be so intense... A beautiful combination... like delving into the forbidden and pushing the boundaries...
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12th Oct 2023 1:53pm
Re. Forbidden...
11th Oct 2023 5:37pm
Tight work and very informative to those questioning minds. This will aide in their decision to be a little more aggressive and appreciate the tightness of this piece. Tight work again Lady
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12th Oct 2023 12:15pm
Always have to keep it tight. ;) I like that you found it very informative and potentially helpful for some. I am here to help so that makes me happy! And I always love getting a tight work from you my dear ME, you know that!
Re. Forbidden...
14th Oct 2023 4:03pm
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16th Oct 2023 1:54am
Well I like that note a lot Styx! ;) Sometimes you just have to say it but I have needs! So many needs... :p (but we aren't going to talk about that lol)
Re. Forbidden...
18th Oct 2023 4:08pm
Phenomenal b/w picture
You sure know how to bring the law and the commands. Dig that
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You sure know how to bring the law and the commands. Dig that
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18th Oct 2023 5:55pm
I love b/w... no colors to distract you. Ah, maybe some chaotic laws... :p But oh yeah, I can give you commands. ;) Still, I know you would like giving me commands... And I know you would Dig that...
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Re. Forbidden...
22nd Oct 2023 5:06pm
The joy of a take charge lover. No permissions, or asking, just doing. The thrill of not know what's cumming. Riding in the passenger seat, destination unknown. You can't overthink or shy away, you are along for the ride.
By now they should know the boundaries, therefore no need to ask again. But then again, sometimes a visa is granted for a border crossing in the moment.
Really enjoyed the need you masterfully portrayed in your poem of your lover being assertive.
By now they should know the boundaries, therefore no need to ask again. But then again, sometimes a visa is granted for a border crossing in the moment.
Really enjoyed the need you masterfully portrayed in your poem of your lover being assertive.
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25th Oct 2023 8:06pm
You got it babe... ;) Take charge, just doing. That really gets the juices flowing. :p I love a great surprise. Especially one that keeps me cumming. Destination unknown, off the beaten path, on my way to my own personal paradise. I will be the best ride ever damnit. ;)
Haha... I like your metaphors and analogies DaVinci. Always pushing boundaries to discover that next destination and explore it so deeply. You might need a visa but it's worth the effort. Each border crossing is so exciting...
So happy you enjoyed it, you definitely get it DV...
Haha... I like your metaphors and analogies DaVinci. Always pushing boundaries to discover that next destination and explore it so deeply. You might need a visa but it's worth the effort. Each border crossing is so exciting...
So happy you enjoyed it, you definitely get it DV...
Re. Forbidden...
28th Oct 2023 3:11am
When there is a true connection, no words are needed. One takes over and the other surrenders to the full of effect of passion and lust.
I liked this lot, it really speaks (without really saying the words) that sometimes passionate encounters are wordless, full of action until both souls are fully satisfied.
Amazing work.
I liked this lot, it really speaks (without really saying the words) that sometimes passionate encounters are wordless, full of action until both souls are fully satisfied.
Amazing work.
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30th Oct 2023 12:25pm
You get it Wally! you know when you have that connection where no words are necessary. Ah, to surrender to the full effect; what an incredible experience that is. ;) I love that you liked it a lot and really get it. Passionate encounters can speak through touch, kissing, and well other stuff; lots of action always...
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3rd Nov 2023 11:34am
Well hey Thor... It's nice to meet you and I am so glad you concur. After all the God of Thunder is known for his assertiveness and getting what he wants right? ;) Welcome to DUP!
Re. Forbidden...
6th Nov 2023 7:38pm
The weak call it rape or sexual assault, the rest of us call it a damn good time. Just grab eachother in the spurt of the moment, clothes ripped and discarded, raw natural mating instinct, don't take no for an answer and fuck the consequences, give everyone else on the bus plenty to complain about for years!
For thow shalt not know lust until thow hath become its mortal slave, and thow shalt not know pleasure until it takes you to thy grave.
Raw, wild and savage. Any time, any place, any how. Life belongs to the living, not the living dead. 😘
For thow shalt not know lust until thow hath become its mortal slave, and thow shalt not know pleasure until it takes you to thy grave.
Raw, wild and savage. Any time, any place, any how. Life belongs to the living, not the living dead. 😘
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7th Nov 2023 3:46pm
Well when you both want it badly then oh yes it's a damn good time isn't it? ;) Grab her passionately, discarding those clothes and let that instinct drive the desire to do anything and everything she wants so badly (and of course you too lol). They will only complain because they want it so bad too... ;) Certainly brings up some memories of being on the train when living in the UK. * nevermind, innocent look *
Ah, I know about being a slave to lust! And pleasure will surely carry me to the grave but I won't stop there. ;) I suppose that's the vampire on me.
Any time, any place, any how OH YES!. Check out "UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS" that I posted quite some time ago. It lines up so well with what you said I think. "Life belongs to the living, not the living dead." Perfectly stated...
Ah, I know about being a slave to lust! And pleasure will surely carry me to the grave but I won't stop there. ;) I suppose that's the vampire on me.
Any time, any place, any how OH YES!. Check out "UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS" that I posted quite some time ago. It lines up so well with what you said I think. "Life belongs to the living, not the living dead." Perfectly stated...
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7th Nov 2023 3:14pm
Well that's the shortest comment I think I have ever gotten. ;) But I appreciate it. You just couldn't help yourself, huh?
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9th Nov 2023 7:21pm
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10th Nov 2023 6:51pm
69 needs to come and 39 and 40 too. :p
It's always good to hear from you...
By the numbers or not.
It's always good to hear from you...
By the numbers or not.
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10th Nov 2023 7:54pm
♋
Numbers can be our friends....
Always a pleasure to comment on your exquisite writing ✍
Numbers can be our friends....
Always a pleasure to comment on your exquisite writing ✍
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Re. Forbidden...
12th Nov 2023 1:43pm
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12th Nov 2023 3:34pm
Hey there Jazz! That is so true. Nothing ventured, nothing gained... Life would be so mundane if we never took chances. And the excitement can be truly spectacular when we do. ;) Even if sometimes it's gets us in trouble. :p