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LET ME POEM YOU
The world is spinning
and rocking on its' axis;
hearts are hurting and
minds can't find peace
or answers to questions.
Disappointment abounds
and hiding places are
filled with searchers who
share the same wishes
and desires.
PLEASE!
Please let me POEM YOU.
Let's share a candle light
dinner in a beautiful setting,
soft music and intimate talk,
I will share poems that
come from my heart and
soul just for YOU. We will
travel the alphabet with nouns,
verbs,,adjetives, and metaphors.
Soft and gentle kisses will
serve as punctuation marks.
PLEASE LET ME POEM YOU!
OKAY?
and rocking on its' axis;
hearts are hurting and
minds can't find peace
or answers to questions.
Disappointment abounds
and hiding places are
filled with searchers who
share the same wishes
and desires.
PLEASE!
Please let me POEM YOU.
Let's share a candle light
dinner in a beautiful setting,
soft music and intimate talk,
I will share poems that
come from my heart and
soul just for YOU. We will
travel the alphabet with nouns,
verbs,,adjetives, and metaphors.
Soft and gentle kisses will
serve as punctuation marks.
PLEASE LET ME POEM YOU!
OKAY?
Published 10th Oct 2023
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10th Oct 2023 3:24pm
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10th Oct 2023 5:41pm
travel the alphabet with nouns,
verbs,,adjetives, and metaphors.
Soft and gentle kisses will
serve as punctuation marks.
This is amazing metaphor, you dont need then a poem, you have just written a superb one my friend, and so attractive ..
stay happy.
verbs,,adjetives, and metaphors.
Soft and gentle kisses will
serve as punctuation marks.
This is amazing metaphor, you dont need then a poem, you have just written a superb one my friend, and so attractive ..
stay happy.
10th Oct 2023 5:43pm
10th Oct 2023 5:55pm
10th Oct 2023 5:57pm
10th Oct 2023 7:13pm
Hi Oralizer,
How's it going?
This is Swooney,George "Da" Clooney.
Capturing the essence of time Rhyme.
Nice write.
Take care.
X
How's it going?
This is Swooney,George "Da" Clooney.
Capturing the essence of time Rhyme.
Nice write.
Take care.
X
10th Oct 2023 11:03pm
11th Oct 2023 4:25am
Yes, like it. Can picture the setting. Red wine... pizza. Am I on the right track here?
11th Oct 2023 1:14pm
