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hurt
cutting words meant to mutilate
deflecting feelings so evident
thrown like daggers
hits a target
I'm left holding my wounds
cold cocked and wordless
my hurt echoes inside me
I revert to the shadows where I am safest
loneliness is better
in the sacred art of death none is better
swing wide and strike
an easy target for you to hit
envenomate and bite
a paralysis of soul ensues
I can neither rise nor sink
in purgatory I languish without you
keening with thoughts
of I shouldn't have
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Re. hurt
9th Oct 2023 8:37pm
Stay in the shadows for a bit until you feel stronger. If it makes you feel any better, Billy is also sitting in a darkened corner tonight... contemplating. You are certainly not alone tonight, my dear. 😊
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Re: Re. hurt
11th Oct 2023 00:18am
thank you dearest Billy for the love on this write yes, there is nothing wrong with the shadows they can be comforting 💕
Re. hurt
9th Oct 2023 8:58pm
Nobody can describe pain quite the way you do Brenda. It is your gift. From pain comes art.
Sorry you are feeling this way. Hope u find your way out and soon.
Love & miss u
Always your Sister
Jackie xoxoxo ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
Sorry you are feeling this way. Hope u find your way out and soon.
Love & miss u
Always your Sister
Jackie xoxoxo ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
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Re: Re. hurt
11th Oct 2023 00:19am
hello beautiful Jackie thank you sweet sister I deeply cherish your thoughts 💕 love you lady....
Re. hurt
9th Oct 2023 9:05pm
There is nothing wrong with the shadows, just don't allow the shadows to become the sole of your existence. Most need a mixture of both shadows and light not necessarily in equal proportions to balance themselves out. Never be afraid to step from the shadow on the chance of some light in your life, the darkness will always be here to retreat into. Tight work
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Re: Re. hurt
11th Oct 2023 00:20am
I agree dearest Me I love the shadows they are kind to me...the dark is my home 💕 thank you my friend...
Re. hurt
10th Oct 2023 00:28am
Re: Re. hurt
11th Oct 2023 00:21am
Re. hurt
10th Oct 2023 00:53am
Piercingly painful! Loneliness is only better when it is the alternative... persevere Bren!
JJ
JJ
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Re: Re. hurt
11th Oct 2023 00:22am
hello dearest JJ sometimes loneliness is preferable perhaps there is dignity there thank you my friend 💕
Re. hurt
10th Oct 2023 1:25am
You definitely nailed it with a hammer hitting the NAIL ON THE HEAD 😯♀️🪷📿👁️👁️🔥💯
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Re: Re. hurt
11th Oct 2023 00:22am
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11th Oct 2023 3:28am
Re: Re. hurt
11th Oct 2023 00:23am
Re. hurt
10th Oct 2023 10:12am
Re: Re. hurt
11th Oct 2023 00:24am
Re. hurt
28th Oct 2023 1:50am
Hurt can run deep, filled with nostalgia that doesn't let us forget.
Beautiful work.
Beautiful work.
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Re: Re. hurt
31st Oct 2023 2:41pm