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Punching bag
I’ve seen a punching bag today
That was left in the rain
It had a hole but not from fist and not from hand
A punching bag yesterday
That was standing in the way
Always in the way, the punching bag is bad
I’ve seen a punching bag, ok?
That really cares bout people’s way
But people just turn round to punch it in the back
I’ve seen a punching bag today
That was beat up, left for decay
A punching bag in the mirror
No one cares
That was left in the rain
It had a hole but not from fist and not from hand
A punching bag yesterday
That was standing in the way
Always in the way, the punching bag is bad
I’ve seen a punching bag, ok?
That really cares bout people’s way
But people just turn round to punch it in the back
I’ve seen a punching bag today
That was beat up, left for decay
A punching bag in the mirror
No one cares
Published 9th Oct 2023
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10th Oct 2023 2:23pm
14th Oct 2023 7:51pm
This is a wonderful piece using metaphors. The final line adds a touch of self-reflection, hinting at a more personal battle. It's beautifully crafted and well-written. Thanks for sharing!
