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Eating Out
I pushed her down
On to the rumpled sheets:
Pressed my uncouth lips
Onto her tender tummy,
Where I hesitated a while
Kissing and licking her
While she happily whimpered
And playfully squirmed;
Holding back
Just a bit longer,
For my true intention,
Our inevitable climax,
Was always
To have her writhing,
Desperately struggling
Against, or with,
The merciless pleasure
Of my mouth against her treasure,
My tongue stoking her like fire,
My lips brushing hers
Like wind-rustled grass,
Like silk skimming on marble,
Like a hungry lover
Determined to bathe her
In a hundred waves
Of pure ecstasy.
On to the rumpled sheets:
Pressed my uncouth lips
Onto her tender tummy,
Where I hesitated a while
Kissing and licking her
While she happily whimpered
And playfully squirmed;
Holding back
Just a bit longer,
For my true intention,
Our inevitable climax,
Was always
To have her writhing,
Desperately struggling
Against, or with,
The merciless pleasure
Of my mouth against her treasure,
My tongue stoking her like fire,
My lips brushing hers
Like wind-rustled grass,
Like silk skimming on marble,
Like a hungry lover
Determined to bathe her
In a hundred waves
Of pure ecstasy.
Published 9th Oct 2023
Author's Note
Oh, come on, the title’s crap, obviously, but dang if I don’t wanna make her cum with just my mouth and tongue.
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9th Oct 2023 6:00am
Puts a new meaning to Eating Out (title perhaps could be expanded to Eating Her Out). Favourite pair of lines:
The merciless pleasure
Of my mouth against her treasure,
The merciless pleasure
Of my mouth against her treasure,
