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lover over the immortal
in my waking dream I see you
I know you feel me
this is real
time is infinite as space
fate or something larger set us into play
I see your face in my mind
I wonder if you know I touch you
without hands seen
I caress your brow
kiss your lips
take my time getting reacquainted with you
I've know you before
in my sleeping dreams
two moonbeams who met on a celestial highway
two falling stars
kismet touches on the air
an ethereal beauty
touching eternity
Published 2nd Oct 2023
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2nd Oct 2023 10:05pm
What!!!! Crimsin your third stanza blew me away. That is exactly how I think. Wow that was so super beautiful.
I ❤️ your writing
I ❤️ your writing
3rd Oct 2023 00:30am
hello beautiful Debbie good afternoon thank you so much lovely lady you make my days brighter with the love you show me 💕
2nd Oct 2023 10:51pm
We thought of two ships passing at night for a moment, but then you added a handshake to the piece. Tight write Lady
3rd Oct 2023 00:31am
3rd Oct 2023 00:24am
This imagery:
two moonbeams who met on a celestial highway
two falling stars
kismet touches on the air
an ethereal beauty
touching eternity
Right there ^ Exquisite!
two moonbeams who met on a celestial highway
two falling stars
kismet touches on the air
an ethereal beauty
touching eternity
Right there ^ Exquisite!
3rd Oct 2023 00:32am
hello beautiful Ahavati thank you lovely lady for sharing your thoughts on this you gifted me smiles 💕
25th Oct 2023 2:14am
