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Superbe avenue

Petite marche
Petit bain de foule
Sur l'Avenue du Mont-Royal

Rue pour tous
Petites boutiques pour gens ais�s
Fortun�s

D�tour et d�couverte d'une petite enclave
Loin du bruit constant
Fraicheur du silence
Quelques feuilles qui tombent
Pr�sage d'un automne sombre

Written by robert43041

(Viking)

Published 23rd Sep 2023

Author's Note

This superb avenue leads directly to Mont-Royal parc (and also to the mountain) �where tons of gatherings, feasts and protests are held year round.....

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Re. Superbe avenue

poeticdelight (Hamid)

- Edited 23rd Sep 2023 5:50pm

23rd Sep 2023 5:47pm

Vous me rappelez Lamartine, voila les feuilles sans seve qui tombent sur le gazon.....
J aime l'esprit d 'un vrai poete qui s' inspire d'un p�ysage pour nous offrie un suc poetique tres succulent.... Bravo !!

https://www.poetica.fr/poeme-483/alphonse-de-lamartine-pensee-des-morts/