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incredible rain: a pentaprismic suite
of floods and famines, flaws and fools
2. floods
incredible rain
stampeding tears from weeping, trembling clouds
comes down on the plane
chanting its chorus recklessly and loud
tight rivers in spate
are swallowed up by splashing, dashing seas
that slowly abate
when kissed by cheering sun and cooling breeze
© Copyright 2023 September 18
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
2. floods
incredible rain
stampeding tears from weeping, trembling clouds
comes down on the plane
chanting its chorus recklessly and loud
tight rivers in spate
are swallowed up by splashing, dashing seas
that slowly abate
when kissed by cheering sun and cooling breeze
© Copyright 2023 September 18
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
Published 22nd Sep 2023
| Edited 24th Sep 2023
Author's Note
Pentaprism: a prism that has five faces, a pair of which are at 90° to each other
Suite: a number of things forming a series or set
This pentaprismic suite comprises 5 shorter poems proliferating around the main theme. It has an opening overture (prelude) and four concordant episodes. Ultimately, it is a single poem in five episodes. This is episode 1.
Suite: a number of things forming a series or set
This pentaprismic suite comprises 5 shorter poems proliferating around the main theme. It has an opening overture (prelude) and four concordant episodes. Ultimately, it is a single poem in five episodes. This is episode 1.
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