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Psychedelic
Psychedelic.
Liken elven.
Psychic spelling.
Mind envelops.
Cycles dwelling.
Time compelling.
Tides are swelling.
Sight, Magellin.
Spices, smelling.
Rice, vanilla.
Slice a melon.
Try to sell it.
Plight develops.
Blight embellished.
Rye amalgam.
Micro gel tabs.
Prices, hellions.
Simon, selfish.
Titles, hellish.
Twice the felons.
Diamonds dealt them.
Dice unveiling.
Rights, rebellion.
Crisis, quelling.
Lightning, pelting.
Striking bell witch.
9/11.
Idols, melting.
Trials felt sin.
Bible, telling.
Michael held switch.
Christ, in El, is.
Liken elven.
Psychic spelling.
Mind envelops.
Cycles dwelling.
Time compelling.
Tides are swelling.
Sight, Magellin.
Spices, smelling.
Rice, vanilla.
Slice a melon.
Try to sell it.
Plight develops.
Blight embellished.
Rye amalgam.
Micro gel tabs.
Prices, hellions.
Simon, selfish.
Titles, hellish.
Twice the felons.
Diamonds dealt them.
Dice unveiling.
Rights, rebellion.
Crisis, quelling.
Lightning, pelting.
Striking bell witch.
9/11.
Idols, melting.
Trials felt sin.
Bible, telling.
Michael held switch.
Christ, in El, is.
Published 19th Sep 2023
| Edited 20th Sep 2023
Author's Note
Just a quick freestyle I typed up.
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19th Sep 2023 12:46pm
This def enveloped my mind.
I feel like reading your work is exercising my mind.
So thanks!!
I feel like reading your work is exercising my mind.
So thanks!!
19th Sep 2023 5:54pm
Thanks for checking it out. I was challenging my vocabulary with the order of syllables, and this is how it turned out. I could've maybe spent more time, and given more specific and thorough direction, theme, and transition, but it was just a freestyle. I mean, there is direction, theme, and transition, but this isn't nearly my best work. Anyway, good to hear from you. I'll see you around!
19th Sep 2023 6:43pm
This is a spell binding piece. I like how it takes off right away, in flight, like dolphins made from endorphins.
I loved the opening stanza, reading through it I felt you weaved into it many different aspects\philosophies.
Shine on! Greets
Rianne
I loved the opening stanza, reading through it I felt you weaved into it many different aspects\philosophies.
Shine on! Greets
Rianne
19th Sep 2023 9:19pm
Hey, thanks for the feedback and checking it out. It's great to hear such encouragement from someone as yourself. I respect your work a lot. I'll see you around!
I suppose an interpretation could be that there is no replacing the great transition of reality that is ahead. There is no "profound" escape, or alternate "definition", whether in psychedelics, or philosophies, or spiritualities, or alternatives to what is about to happen. What seems so esoteric, that the world is seemingly blind to, is about to be experienced in a grandeur way, and it's on the horizon. All of the spiritual idolatry and sin in the world is about to be exposed, when the presence of God's government on earth is a basic given...
