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Don’t Shoot The Messenger.
Staring at you while I choke on it so you can see the tears and dedication in my eyes, don’t be surprised that the passions of my soul began to enlighten and come alive the moment that my tongue started to landscape and pry for your sweet spot, the one that’ll have you like Tarzan coming down from the treetops. To be honest I’m really shy, I would have to feel comfortable around someone to let them see the other side, look me in my eyes no one will ever know… that I can make a pretty dick disappear down my fucking throat. I haven’t fully learned how to walk with a head full of confidence, more confident in my head because it only makes sense, I just want to be boo’d up and nasty, slurp the juices from my pussy then kiss me and spit it back at me.
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Re. Don’t Shoot The Messenger.
17th Sep 2023 4:28am
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17th Sep 2023 8:14am
Re. Don’t Shoot The Messenger.
Anonymous
17th Sep 2023 6:48am
This requires further examination
...makes me wanna write something in response
...makes me wanna write something in response

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Re: Re. Don’t Shoot The Messenger.
17th Sep 2023 8:17am
If that’s what your heart desires, we love a good response piece! Thank you for reading ❤️
Re. Don’t Shoot The Messenger.
17th Sep 2023 8:35am
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 absolutely amazing 👏 queen 👸!! Excellent musing my favorite lines!
the passions of my soul began to enlighten and come alive the moment that my tongue started to landscape and pry for your sweet spot, the one that’ll have you like Tarzan coming down from the treetops. To be honest!!
Great 👍 ink spill queen 👸 please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
the passions of my soul began to enlighten and come alive the moment that my tongue started to landscape and pry for your sweet spot, the one that’ll have you like Tarzan coming down from the treetops. To be honest!!
Great 👍 ink spill queen 👸 please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
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17th Sep 2023 11:40am
Re. Don’t Shoot The Messenger.
18th Sep 2023 3:17pm
Re. Don’t Shoot The Messenger.
18th Sep 2023 11:36pm
Thanks for sharing this great erotic write, look forward to more. Hugs and peace, Oral
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19th Sep 2023 00:03am
Re. Don’t Shoot The Messenger.
4th Oct 2023 1:18am
Hoi hoi
Hope this finds you well.
Travelling, as I do a lot, takes me to places where the connection with internet is often scarce or interrupted.
I missed this one so I have some reading up to do..
Needless to say I love this one to bits and I’ll be back for an eyeful of happiness soon.
Thank you for your lovely writes!!!
Kind regards, Gus
Hope this finds you well.
Travelling, as I do a lot, takes me to places where the connection with internet is often scarce or interrupted.
I missed this one so I have some reading up to do..
Needless to say I love this one to bits and I’ll be back for an eyeful of happiness soon.
Thank you for your lovely writes!!!
Kind regards, Gus
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Re: Re. Don’t Shoot The Messenger.
11th Oct 2023 4:51am
Awww safe travels to you my friend! Thank you for taking the time to read my ramblings lol ❤️❤️
Re. Don’t Shoot The Messenger.
7th Jan 2025 3:09am
Thanks for reposting this great poem. It is hotter the second time. Hugs and love. Oral
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2nd Feb 2025 1:57pm
Re. Don’t Shoot The Messenger.
4th Feb 2025 6:39pm
Very graphic loved how you topped it off with that last line, the cherry on top.
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4th Feb 2025 7:49pm
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Re. Don’t Shoot The Messenger.
5th Feb 2025 00:23am
This rocks! The detail in the wording, brings me right there. You nailed it!
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5th Feb 2025 00:23am