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Cloudscape
Coy he isn’t
He’s confident inside
His cloudscape
Where black and white
Collide into lightning
Lighting the landscape
Of his poetic mind along
With an occasional cigarette
Answering the call
Of being struck
On his back porch
In only a towel that’s
Still damp from his shower
Where lines of smoke
Are written in sync with
The pulse flashing inside
His electric blue eyes
When he’s focused
In rainwater soaked hair
Embracing the storm
Where grey turns to chrome
Machine clouds creating
Surrounding me with a home
How I never want to leave
Being completely covered
Drifting on a dreamscape
Of love’s vapor
Inhaling, taking a hit
From my cloudscape lover
He’s confident inside
His cloudscape
Where black and white
Collide into lightning
Lighting the landscape
Of his poetic mind along
With an occasional cigarette
Answering the call
Of being struck
On his back porch
In only a towel that’s
Still damp from his shower
Where lines of smoke
Are written in sync with
The pulse flashing inside
His electric blue eyes
When he’s focused
In rainwater soaked hair
Embracing the storm
Where grey turns to chrome
Machine clouds creating
Surrounding me with a home
How I never want to leave
Being completely covered
Drifting on a dreamscape
Of love’s vapor
Inhaling, taking a hit
From my cloudscape lover
Author's Note
I took a pic of some clouds and sent to Mark.
He said it reminded him of his brain. LOL
So this is how I got the inspiration for this write:)
Maybe one day I'll up my membership here and post pics along with my writings.
But for now I'm just writing:)
Love ya Mark!! MMWWAAAA
He said it reminded him of his brain. LOL
So this is how I got the inspiration for this write:)
Maybe one day I'll up my membership here and post pics along with my writings.
But for now I'm just writing:)
Love ya Mark!! MMWWAAAA
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Re. Cloudscape
17th Sep 2023 00:19am
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22nd Sep 2023 1:40am
If we don't reach the clouds are we really flying? haha
Thanks for all the support Cisco!!
Thanks for all the support Cisco!!
Re. Cloudscape
17th Sep 2023 2:42pm
There is such great imagery here and more than a hint of deep emotion! 😊
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22nd Sep 2023 1:42am
Hi Willow:)
Thank you so much!
Imagery is kind of my thing.
I love painting pics with words. The challenge of it.
Thanks for stopping by and the RL
Woop Woop!!!
Thank you so much!
Imagery is kind of my thing.
I love painting pics with words. The challenge of it.
Thanks for stopping by and the RL
Woop Woop!!!
Re. Cloudscape
17th Sep 2023 4:04pm
(I feel awkward giving this a RL. It feels like self promotion if I do.)
Then again, how lucky I am, to have you making me glad to be me, as is. No pretenses, no overly distraught self doubts. You make me feel valuable. And any good within me, is yours to keep.
You are incredible. Lightning did finally strike. It brought you into my life.
Then again, how lucky I am, to have you making me glad to be me, as is. No pretenses, no overly distraught self doubts. You make me feel valuable. And any good within me, is yours to keep.
You are incredible. Lightning did finally strike. It brought you into my life.
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22nd Sep 2023 1:46am
Hey babe!!
Don't feel awkward. I've read many pieces about me that you've written.
Shoe's on the other foot now! LOL
How you feel is how I feel when I read your stuff.
It brought you into my life. Writing did. I would have never met you
if it wasn't for our writing. I'm very blessed to have that in common with you.
So don't feel awkward.
Love ya:)
Don't feel awkward. I've read many pieces about me that you've written.
Shoe's on the other foot now! LOL
How you feel is how I feel when I read your stuff.
It brought you into my life. Writing did. I would have never met you
if it wasn't for our writing. I'm very blessed to have that in common with you.
So don't feel awkward.
Love ya:)
Re. Cloudscape
18th Sep 2023 5:00am
Dear A,
It’s always a joy to see how love develops along the way. The pictures you paint with words are a lovely insight to how you’re feeling and it’s a delight to read. H🌷
It’s always a joy to see how love develops along the way. The pictures you paint with words are a lovely insight to how you’re feeling and it’s a delight to read. H🌷
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Re: Re. Cloudscape
22nd Sep 2023 1:48am
Hi H!!
Thanks for all of your support throughout my time here at DUP.
I'm in a great place in my life. I'm happy to share it with whoever
will read:)
Thanks for the RL and being a great person!!
Thanks for all of your support throughout my time here at DUP.
I'm in a great place in my life. I'm happy to share it with whoever
will read:)
Thanks for the RL and being a great person!!
Re. Cloudscape
20th Sep 2023 2:11am
Hey pssst, I snuck the R/L in anyway. Because you wrote it and I love you!
Bonus!
Bonus!
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