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Dewy Morn
dewdrops on branch tips
gleaming glistening glowing
like precocious gems
© 2023 Raibeart Bruis
gleaming glistening glowing
like precocious gems
© 2023 Raibeart Bruis
Published 15th Sep 2023
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15th Sep 2023 9:05pm
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16th Sep 2023 11:10am
Dear KP,
Lovely imagery and great alliteration on the second line. I really enjoyed this piece. Your use of nature and its beauty were captured so wonderfully. H🌷
Lovely imagery and great alliteration on the second line. I really enjoyed this piece. Your use of nature and its beauty were captured so wonderfully. H🌷
