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He Must've Had A Wild Party Last Night
It was on a Saturday that we went to
Jason's pad and knocked on the door only to have
it opened by some naked chick smiling and
yet looking more like her mind was in a deep fog.
Jason's pad and knocked on the door only to have
it opened by some naked chick smiling and
yet looking more like her mind was in a deep fog.
Published 14th Sep 2023
Author's Note
The title of this bayra poem happens to be what one of a group of friend say after witnessing an unusual sight in front of them.
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14th Sep 2023 11:32am
Rhyming advice I could have offered Jason:
Don't let her answer the door
when she's reduced to the raw.
Don't let her answer the door
when she's reduced to the raw.
14th Sep 2023 6:59pm
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