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Silence of the Sea
euphoric-kindle night undresses
the delicate petals clinging loosely
around your body—to let your
sweet nectaring lips secrete wild
aphrodisic scents all over you nude
nylon tights that you only have on.
its moon caresses you with kisses—
on neck and on peaks in umber
perturbing from bosoms—while
savorly teasing you on its way down
to your lips behind soaked fabric.
its sea strokes waves on the sand—
and by the calls of the moon, your
thoughts too recede into ecstasy,
until you cannot hold in the craving
no more—only the night's warm
topaz piercing deep inside you and
rifting your seal; your moan breaks
the silence like the way the sirens'
songs beckon sailor to their lands—
you wearily collapse into the night's
embrace; you release the rest of
your sweet nectar, while the moon
releases its silky moonlight in you.
the delicate petals clinging loosely
around your body—to let your
sweet nectaring lips secrete wild
aphrodisic scents all over you nude
nylon tights that you only have on.
its moon caresses you with kisses—
on neck and on peaks in umber
perturbing from bosoms—while
savorly teasing you on its way down
to your lips behind soaked fabric.
its sea strokes waves on the sand—
and by the calls of the moon, your
thoughts too recede into ecstasy,
until you cannot hold in the craving
no more—only the night's warm
topaz piercing deep inside you and
rifting your seal; your moan breaks
the silence like the way the sirens'
songs beckon sailor to their lands—
you wearily collapse into the night's
embrace; you release the rest of
your sweet nectar, while the moon
releases its silky moonlight in you.
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Re. Silence of the Sea
14th Sep 2023 10:25am
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14th Sep 2023 11:10am
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16th Sep 2023 5:06am
Re. Silence of the Sea
15th Sep 2023 6:35am
Hoi hoi
Hope this finds you well.
There’s so much of beauty in this delicate write.
It’s almost like a prayer.
Welcome to you, very talented gabbyt!
Hope you’ll share more with us.
Kind regards, Gus
Hope this finds you well.
There’s so much of beauty in this delicate write.
It’s almost like a prayer.
Welcome to you, very talented gabbyt!
Hope you’ll share more with us.
Kind regards, Gus
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16th Sep 2023 5:07am
Re. Silence of the Sea
16th Sep 2023 2:39pm
Re. Silence of the Sea
woah your metaphors are absolutely breathtaking, i could feel every inch of this poem
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Re. Silence of the Sea
18th Sep 2023 8:51am
How to prevent a rampaging Werewolf causing havoc and taking lives? Meet him on the moon lit beach and indulge in a different kind of sensual savagery.
I'm sure this wasn't what you had in mind, but to me, the wolf and the moon are as intertwined as the timeless bond between man and woman. For it isn't just the moon that can bring the beast out of the man. 😉
A beautiful piece of work that flows as freely as a stream soaked with the endless desires of a lady's fantasies. Xxx
I'm sure this wasn't what you had in mind, but to me, the wolf and the moon are as intertwined as the timeless bond between man and woman. For it isn't just the moon that can bring the beast out of the man. 😉
A beautiful piece of work that flows as freely as a stream soaked with the endless desires of a lady's fantasies. Xxx
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I love the interpretation of the poem :) Maybe this will inspire me with write some saucy with that theme 😈
Re. Silence of the Sea
19th Sep 2023 9:43am
I like the way you take the reader on a journey but leave completion in the imagination of the reader.
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20th Sep 2023 5:40am
Re. Silence of the Sea
20th Sep 2023 8:10pm
"We dip into the sensual sea
Of our penetrating passion,
Submerging with the deepest
Discovery of a soaked seduction,
Like two lost lovers seeking the
Treasures of playful pleasures,
Under the glistening glow above
The roaring ripples of lush lust.
Your kinetic kisses conduce me
To luscious lips of a narrow inlet,
Beyond the edge of the persuaded
Peaks of your blossoming bosom,
And the voluptuous valley of the
Temptions of a blushing burst,
Where the mystic moon infuses
Our bodies with its luminous light."
Well that was a sensually beautiful in every way ... magnificent. It purely beautiful and I very much enjoyed reading your poem Thank you for sharing this gem with all of us. , waiting for your new writings
Of our penetrating passion,
Submerging with the deepest
Discovery of a soaked seduction,
Like two lost lovers seeking the
Treasures of playful pleasures,
Under the glistening glow above
The roaring ripples of lush lust.
Your kinetic kisses conduce me
To luscious lips of a narrow inlet,
Beyond the edge of the persuaded
Peaks of your blossoming bosom,
And the voluptuous valley of the
Temptions of a blushing burst,
Where the mystic moon infuses
Our bodies with its luminous light."
Well that was a sensually beautiful in every way ... magnificent. It purely beautiful and I very much enjoyed reading your poem Thank you for sharing this gem with all of us. , waiting for your new writings
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23rd Sep 2023 11:41pm