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Bitter Heartbeat
untemded heart
will turn bitter
with each unheard
heartbeat....
love stagnates
within soft
red walls
true cruelties
of an
unrequited heart
barbed wire
retorts hide
each rejection
tasting bile
in each romantic
thought
knowing....
my heart
doesn't easily
love
or forget
will turn bitter
with each unheard
heartbeat....
love stagnates
within soft
red walls
true cruelties
of an
unrequited heart
barbed wire
retorts hide
each rejection
tasting bile
in each romantic
thought
knowing....
my heart
doesn't easily
love
or forget
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Re. Bitter Heartbeat
14th Sep 2023 3:40am
hello dearest poet does this person know how you feel?
I feel your heart here...
I feel your heart here...
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14th Sep 2023 5:11am
that is the worse kind of love when you try your hardest to give but its either not taken or used against you
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14th Sep 2023 5:14am
I'm alright but I feel they want me to divorce my husband but I need him to care for me and I love him also...
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