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REDEFINING ROMANCE
You entered my world like an arrow
Piercing my very core
Leaving me breathless
Craving, longing for more
More of your warm breath on my body
Besides the taste of his lips
I needed to feel your fire gently
Savoring sips
I had never before felt passion so fierce
My heart and soul entered a trance
I was captivated by the enchantment
Exquisite lovers
Redefining romance
Piercing my very core
Leaving me breathless
Craving, longing for more
More of your warm breath on my body
Besides the taste of his lips
I needed to feel your fire gently
Savoring sips
I had never before felt passion so fierce
My heart and soul entered a trance
I was captivated by the enchantment
Exquisite lovers
Redefining romance
Published 14th Sep 2023
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Redefining romance through rewriting the Kama Sutra! Favourite lines the first:
"You entered my world like an arrow
Piercing my very core
Leaving me breathless,
Craving, longing for more"
These smashed and grabbed my attention, got me up straight away.
"You entered my world like an arrow
Piercing my very core
Leaving me breathless,
Craving, longing for more"
These smashed and grabbed my attention, got me up straight away.
14th Sep 2023 6:26am
