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I am so angry with you.
Tension, heightened, affliction.
What am I to do?
You caused this addiction.
Craving to release these fumes,
I am so angry with you.
External calm.
Internal suffering...
What am I to do?
Left me wondering why.
Wandering mind, feeling so blind...
I am so angry with you.
Stepped on, treated like dirt.
Taking a step back or two.
What am I to do?
I said we're through...
Do I mean what I say??
I am so angry with you.
What am I to do?
Tension, heightened, affliction.
What am I to do?
You caused this addiction.
Craving to release these fumes,
I am so angry with you.
External calm.
Internal suffering...
What am I to do?
Left me wondering why.
Wandering mind, feeling so blind...
I am so angry with you.
Stepped on, treated like dirt.
Taking a step back or two.
What am I to do?
I said we're through...
Do I mean what I say??
I am so angry with you.
What am I to do?
Published 13th Sep 2023
Author's Note
My second practice "villanelle" poem! This one came from a very dark place. However, I am happy to finally be able to bring it out in my art! Friendly criticism welcome, in order to help me improve upon this writing style, thanks!
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- Edited Yesterday 1:50am
13th Sep 2023 7:05pm
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13th Sep 2023 10:49pm
Thank you sou much, it's comments like these that continue to motivate me! I am super greatful!
