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lightning piercing grey
a single glimmer
barely visible
on the distant horizon
blindingly vibrant
for these forest eyes
lately too accustomed to dark
when days blur
and nights shiver silently by
one after another
that shimmering flash rather beguiles
beauty unexpected
a kiss blown upon the wind
as off in the distance
thunder softly rolls in
breath catching in throat
suddenly filled with a growing feeling
remarkably akin to…hope
could there be a brighter tomorrow
and so begins the wait
in this lackluster landscape
and half-hearted rain
Published 13th Sep 2023
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13th Sep 2023 3:22am
I really love the sentiment and flow of this one beautiful Willow
really well written 💕
really well written 💕
15th Sep 2023 3:23pm
13th Sep 2023 3:25pm
15th Sep 2023 3:24pm
Sometimes it just feels like the rain isn't fully committed...emotions can be like that too, I think. Thank you so much, Ahavati! 😊
14th Sep 2023 1:37am
Certain poetry stands out. This does.
Well crafted write. It's a joy to read great stuff.
Well crafted write. It's a joy to read great stuff.
15th Sep 2023 3:25pm
