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YOU ARE SO INVITING
You are so inviting,
raising thoughts through writing -
thoughts of us uniting,
one on one alighting,
our desires past fighting -
staying overnighting,
when life's wrongs have righting,
kissing, nuzzling, biting
under turned off lighting -
To wake to sun's sighting.
raising thoughts through writing -
thoughts of us uniting,
one on one alighting,
our desires past fighting -
staying overnighting,
when life's wrongs have righting,
kissing, nuzzling, biting
under turned off lighting -
To wake to sun's sighting.
Published 8th Sep 2023
Author's Note
An imagined rhyming reply to someone's written erotic overtures, be they letters or poems.....
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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8th Sep 2023 12:03pm
8th Sep 2023 12:39pm
8th Sep 2023 2:41pm
There's a rhyming so inviting, when raving with aging then comes the beauteous
poem enticing, thank for your humor and your support Solomon..
Stay happy my friend
poem enticing, thank for your humor and your support Solomon..
Stay happy my friend
8th Sep 2023 3:15pm
8th Sep 2023 2:50pm
Great rhyming and meter; have a continuing creative day. Hugs and peace, Oral
10th Sep 2023 1:48pm
Well done and so delighting
Tell me, was there any biting?
Great job with the rhyming
Tell me, was there any biting?
Great job with the rhyming
11th Sep 2023 7:13pm
Awww, this is pretty clever, Soloman & somewhat disarming. I really feel you could win anyone over with these lines!
Here's my own brief spin on what you wrote:
"When life's wrongs have writing."
Nice one! 😀
Here's my own brief spin on what you wrote:
"When life's wrongs have writing."
Nice one! 😀
13th Sep 2023 4:29am
Mmm... I swore I heard soft violins playing in the background as I gently sipped on the mental essence of such poetic flattery, my wise poet.. simply loving your flow above.
Grand Rising to you and enjoy your Wednesday.
Grand Rising to you and enjoy your Wednesday.
