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Rewinding
am i that man
riding the dark carousel
as it spins backward
younger with each turn
past events clearer
with each revolution
twisting the telescope
focusing deeper
farther into my story
if i peer
deeply enough
will i see
the beginning
or the end
© 2023 Raibeart Bruis
riding the dark carousel
as it spins backward
younger with each turn
past events clearer
with each revolution
twisting the telescope
focusing deeper
farther into my story
if i peer
deeply enough
will i see
the beginning
or the end
© 2023 Raibeart Bruis
Published 1st Sep 2023
Author's Note
Rereading Ray Bradbury brings up some vivid imagery and questions about life, the universe and everything.
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1st Sep 2023 6:51pm
1st Sep 2023 8:12pm
hello dearest poet I'm just coming up with more questions
I had a break from reality so to speak and I heard a voice talking to me
who answered a lot of question but lead me to new questions...
if you get any answers let me know...
great write...
I had a break from reality so to speak and I heard a voice talking to me
who answered a lot of question but lead me to new questions...
if you get any answers let me know...
great write...
2nd Sep 2023 00:00am
