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Voices Implore
Voices implore.
Choices, accord.
Voyage of sorts.
Poising, in store.
Coy is this sport.
Freudian, fore.
Spoiling has formed.
Toying, with doors.
Loins see a storm.
Pointing, appoint.
Oil meets the world.
Goyim, engorge?
Loitering lore.
Cloying, before.
Foiling affords.
Coining, retort.
Ploy will import.
Noises, annoyed.
Boy can distort.
Voided, report.
Roiling destroys.
Soiling, absorb.
Boiling ahoy.
Moisten, and morph.
Droids deem discord.
'Roids as, our war.
Poisonous core.
Soylent, deformed.
Joining abhors.
Coiling, reform.
Joyous contort.
Hoisting, reborn.
Choices, accord.
Voyage of sorts.
Poising, in store.
Coy is this sport.
Freudian, fore.
Spoiling has formed.
Toying, with doors.
Loins see a storm.
Pointing, appoint.
Oil meets the world.
Goyim, engorge?
Loitering lore.
Cloying, before.
Foiling affords.
Coining, retort.
Ploy will import.
Noises, annoyed.
Boy can distort.
Voided, report.
Roiling destroys.
Soiling, absorb.
Boiling ahoy.
Moisten, and morph.
Droids deem discord.
'Roids as, our war.
Poisonous core.
Soylent, deformed.
Joining abhors.
Coiling, reform.
Joyous contort.
Hoisting, reborn.
Published 26th Aug 2023
Author's Note
Given the vocabulary, this took an exhausted attempt of rhyming 32 words with "oy", so forgive any potential abstraction. Anyway, this is more or less about ignoring the conflict in the world, and how it can result in bias, partiality, or prejudice. You end up becoming what you judge. Choosing sides in the world, in general, is that way. Anyway, eventually, one is confronted with the destruction of reality, in that we are all inherently prejudiced, and with war being the proof of that. The only hope is to trust in God to deliver you, rather than putting trust in humankind to save you. I hope my attempt at carrying the 4-syllable rhyme scheme through 8 stanzas and 32 lines can be appreciated, especially with such vocabulary. Thanks for checking it out!
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26th Aug 2023 5:35pm
Hello C,
Firstly this was an amazing dive into many ink pools of reflections. Through the lines I saw themes such as conflict\the eternal scale thats always seeking balance. Where it felt like conversations with innate spheres that are non human though know of \about the human forms and shapes. Your poetry reads in and between galdr, and speaking in tongues, speaking in the tones from the tongues\language of the verbs used.
You anointed the words into a salvation
I saw reference to modern worlds versus older traditions. Maybe even towards the end a metamorphosis of sorts
And more, much more. I can only state rhyming is an art on its own.
greets
A\R
