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and he better not duck...
she only writes when emotions run high
deeply inspired
by moments of intensity
her release valve
when it all gets too much
greatly impacted
by upheavals, actions & thoughts
in a very real sense
it's never a good thing
when she remains silent
without passion, anger, pain or lust
her words all crumble into so much dust
I'm hit with both grief & delight
whenever she picks up the pen
and starts to write
seeing tears making tracks down her beautiful face
is almost more than I can take
and I encourage her words
knowing she grows through the verse
all the while...
...really wanting to slap him...
Copyright @ 2023 Willow. All rights reserved
Published 21st Aug 2023
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21st Aug 2023 1:47pm
21st Aug 2023 9:19pm
Anonymous
21st Aug 2023 4:36pm
I think there’s something to be said about vulnerability here, and how we become so protective of that when it comes to our nearest and dearest.
To be completely honest, I saw parts of myself there, especially the part about remaining quiet when other people don’t know the horrendous impact they are having.
What matters is, your intentions are pure, and everything else, it will work out, my love.
Thank you for sharing this one.
-M
To be completely honest, I saw parts of myself there, especially the part about remaining quiet when other people don’t know the horrendous impact they are having.
What matters is, your intentions are pure, and everything else, it will work out, my love.
Thank you for sharing this one.
-M
21st Aug 2023 9:21pm
Odd how we'll sit still and silently take it when it's aimed at ourselves, but when it's someone you love the claws come out. Dude is lucky I'm nowhere near or he'd be stinging. Thank you for understanding this one, Missy. I thought you would
21st Aug 2023 6:14pm
hello beautiful Willow this is a very powerful write for your loved one
he better treat her right...I feel this deeply 💕
he better treat her right...I feel this deeply 💕
21st Aug 2023 9:21pm
The man is an idiot...and lost his chances. His own fault and & good riddance, I say. Thank you, Brenda
