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Betrayal (being lied to)
betrayal
is finding
that the trust
and love given
was just
plastic packaging
once opened
simply
dicarded
is finding
that the trust
and love given
was just
plastic packaging
once opened
simply
dicarded
Published 21st Aug 2023
Author's Note
For the Betrayal competition
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- Edited 28th Mar 2025 1:50am
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25th Aug 2023 3:31am
This love doesn't sound very deep at all! Best of luck in the competition.
