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The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency (Spoken Word)
Growl your stark truth
Speak plain and clear from the belly
Look me in the eyes while unburdening yourself
Connect to our thrill as sparks electrify
Feed my own wickedness in full
Set us free, love
I quiver to each of my questions
You answer them thoroughly upon my body
Sign your mark of forever engravement
Because in this rare salvation
We collide like stars
Find exquisite rapture in suffered rich ecstasy
I choose you... you, infiltrator of my flesh
and masterful keeper of all my secret'd secrets
Follow me to higher heights as I follow you
Our transcendence begins with a devastating kiss
Slow warm and absolutely everything
Deep entanglements of scrumptious desire
stroke and suck with tempered tongue
Such carefully able strong ample lips,
I die at every soft confidence
Fueling my addiction of your, no our
ambrosial decadence
Pulling you closer... deeper... so fucking deep
Anticipation pounds the blood
We hum in a sensual solipsism
Where you are wholly mine
I selfishly let you know
with even the smallest movement(s)
exactly that
I am beautiful surrender - You are intoxicating lure
The dire desperate truth of you and I
clings to us like the smell of wonderment
after the rain—
I breathe. it. in.
Can barely contain control
as you gather us up in swift poetic motion
I simply manage "take me"
And in our preordained blessing of
hedonistic hellfire imbued with
hyperfocused tenderness,
you reply in a language
we've created
one
I speak
fluently
Speak plain and clear from the belly
Look me in the eyes while unburdening yourself
Connect to our thrill as sparks electrify
Feed my own wickedness in full
Set us free, love
I quiver to each of my questions
You answer them thoroughly upon my body
Sign your mark of forever engravement
Because in this rare salvation
We collide like stars
Find exquisite rapture in suffered rich ecstasy
I choose you... you, infiltrator of my flesh
and masterful keeper of all my secret'd secrets
Follow me to higher heights as I follow you
Our transcendence begins with a devastating kiss
Slow warm and absolutely everything
Deep entanglements of scrumptious desire
stroke and suck with tempered tongue
Such carefully able strong ample lips,
I die at every soft confidence
Fueling my addiction of your, no our
ambrosial decadence
Pulling you closer... deeper... so fucking deep
Anticipation pounds the blood
We hum in a sensual solipsism
Where you are wholly mine
I selfishly let you know
with even the smallest movement(s)
exactly that
I am beautiful surrender - You are intoxicating lure
The dire desperate truth of you and I
clings to us like the smell of wonderment
after the rain—
I breathe. it. in.
Can barely contain control
as you gather us up in swift poetic motion
I simply manage "take me"
And in our preordained blessing of
hedonistic hellfire imbued with
hyperfocused tenderness,
you reply in a language
we've created
one
I speak
fluently
Author's Note
©Blu2023
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Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
17th Aug 2023 6:52pm
I loveeeeeeed it!! you really do have a passion and a desire and amazing in your work here! so exotic and erotic, exactly what i was looking for! wonderful and great job
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Wow, MP... I am humbled by your thoughtful kind words. The written passion is my ardent attempt to capture something that when in reality feels even more exponentially effervescent ...
I'm truly delighted you loved reading like you described.
Thank you for sharing your feedback and for the generous list add as well.
Lovely to see you 🦋
🌹B
I'm truly delighted you loved reading like you described.
Thank you for sharing your feedback and for the generous list add as well.
Lovely to see you 🦋
🌹B
Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
17th Aug 2023 6:52pm
.and you cum as in your ears he wispers and call you his favorite cunt...........You do write hard-hitting stuff. Kisses, Robert.
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Re: Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
17th Aug 2023 7:52pm
So many different scenarios abound, don't they!?!?... Mmmm, that's half the joy of having a writer's imagination... lol.. *wink
Wonderfully debauched reply... I'm devilishly smiling...
Thank you, kind sir.
🌹B
Wonderfully debauched reply... I'm devilishly smiling...
Thank you, kind sir.
🌹B
Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
17th Aug 2023 7:19pm
This doesn't need a long comment, but tons of adjectives following steamy could apply. Our favorite as you know is as always lady, so excruciatingly tight
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Hey there, Me
As much as I admit how much I do Iove those steamy adjectives, they simply pale in comparison to your 'excruciatingly tight' which I'll take any day as a complete and total triumph!! Yessss! I freaking love your 'seal of approval', so to speak... ;)
Thanks for feeling this one, it's pretty close to my heart.
Always a genuine pleasure to have you visit... missed it.
🌹💙 - x
As much as I admit how much I do Iove those steamy adjectives, they simply pale in comparison to your 'excruciatingly tight' which I'll take any day as a complete and total triumph!! Yessss! I freaking love your 'seal of approval', so to speak... ;)
Thanks for feeling this one, it's pretty close to my heart.
Always a genuine pleasure to have you visit... missed it.
🌹💙 - x
Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
17th Aug 2023 7:21pm
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17th Aug 2023 7:25pm
Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
17th Aug 2023 7:46pm
My strong beautiful smart sexy woman you spark my electricity. Keep on writing my sexy woman.
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I think the building up of that electric charge is always something you carry, dear Francisco!
Thanks so much for being that lightning bolt that leaves it's sparks upon my page... ⚡
Gotta love that charm -
🌹B
Thanks so much for being that lightning bolt that leaves it's sparks upon my page... ⚡
Gotta love that charm -
🌹B
Re: Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
18th Aug 2023 2:42am
Re. Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
17th Aug 2023 9:43pm
Always painting sexuality in phrasings which pause the mind a moment to stare in a vicarious, "if only..."
Well done (once again) S. 🌼
Well done (once again) S. 🌼
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Re: Re. Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
18th Aug 2023 1:30pm
I hope there was some really wonderful, umm 'thoughts'.. within those moments staring.. Oh to be a fly on the wall... ;)
You humble me, kind Sir.
Love that "if only"... now you know how I feel when I read your exquisite ink.
Much love, dear J
🌹💙 - x
You humble me, kind Sir.
Love that "if only"... now you know how I feel when I read your exquisite ink.
Much love, dear J
🌹💙 - x
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Perhaps one day we'll share words on a page instead of being voyuers to one anothers poems. Just a thought...🌼💙
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Re: Re. Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
18th Aug 2023 9:31pm
Ohhh my, that is definitely some delicious food for thought.... I'll surely keep it in mind. -
Thank you for the kind offer, J
🌹🌼
Thank you for the kind offer, J
🌹🌼
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18th Aug 2023 9:39pm
Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
18th Aug 2023 1:14am
hello beautiful Blue this is heady intoxicating stuff
it wrapped around me and pulled me in
until I succumb to the feeling... I love it 💕
it wrapped around me and pulled me in
until I succumb to the feeling... I love it 💕
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Good morning, dear poetess...✨
It's beyond thrilling to have you here with me, feeling the rapture and want to succumb... Girl, you made my day with such thoughtfully alluring feedback!
I very much appreciate you taking the time to share your coveted pov with me.
I adore you and value your opinions, feelings and emotional takeaways, it means a lot to me, Bren.
Thank you -♡
-B
It's beyond thrilling to have you here with me, feeling the rapture and want to succumb... Girl, you made my day with such thoughtfully alluring feedback!
I very much appreciate you taking the time to share your coveted pov with me.
I adore you and value your opinions, feelings and emotional takeaways, it means a lot to me, Bren.
Thank you -♡
-B
Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
18th Aug 2023 7:27am
Hoi hoi
Yes, you write things only you can do.
You speak the language fluently and fluidly……
And I admire you for it!
Kind regards,ds, Gus
Yes, you write things only you can do.
You speak the language fluently and fluidly……
And I admire you for it!
Kind regards,ds, Gus
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Hoi hoi
Your warm wishes and lovely visit make for a happy Blue! You feeling the 'fluency' within this piece is exactly what I hoped like hell to try and capture, so the fact that you could is thrilling. You humble me.
All my returned admiration, dearest Gus.
Please know I absolutely love seeing you 🦋.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and taking the time.
🌹💙-x
Your warm wishes and lovely visit make for a happy Blue! You feeling the 'fluency' within this piece is exactly what I hoped like hell to try and capture, so the fact that you could is thrilling. You humble me.
All my returned admiration, dearest Gus.
Please know I absolutely love seeing you 🦋.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and taking the time.
🌹💙-x
Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
18th Aug 2023 9:18am
A true poetic confession... bold... yet submissive... flows with such seductive grace... from beginning to its exquisite end...
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Re: Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
18th Aug 2023 1:41pm
I can't thank you enough for reading and feeling that confessional essence even when I didn't opt to use that tag, it really is... What an eagle eye!
You take my breath away, LilD.... You being so present and connected, makes a difference... don't ever question that... it really does.
Much love and appreciation
🌹 B
You take my breath away, LilD.... You being so present and connected, makes a difference... don't ever question that... it really does.
Much love and appreciation
🌹 B
Re: Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
22nd Aug 2023 3:31pm
The only thing better than reading one of your poems... is listening to one of your poems... well done B...
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22nd Aug 2023 3:37pm
Re: Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
29th Aug 2023 11:59am
Wish I could give you a second RL just for the reading... well done B... when is the book coming out...
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Re: Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
29th Aug 2023 1:04pm
hahaha... ohh you! .. Maybe one day... It is a bucket list checkmark ...
Thanks, LilD
You made my hectic morning preparing for hurricane Idalia a lot less stressful!
-💙
Thanks, LilD
You made my hectic morning preparing for hurricane Idalia a lot less stressful!
-💙
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29th Aug 2023 1:10pm
Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
18th Aug 2023 10:37am
Dear BV,
No one can write like this but you. There’s so much passion without graphics. There’s a level of class imbued with a much higher level of va va va vooooooom! I’d write more but it would be redundant. Everyone above has covered it all 😉
Fab and double fab!! H🌷
No one can write like this but you. There’s so much passion without graphics. There’s a level of class imbued with a much higher level of va va va vooooooom! I’d write more but it would be redundant. Everyone above has covered it all 😉
Fab and double fab!! H🌷
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18th Aug 2023 1:50pm
H,
Sometimes there comes a day that starts so crummy you never think you'll be able to get it back on track, and you just KNOW the whole day is henceforth shot to shit... That's been my day so far this morning until I read your awesomely pride infusing feedback. WOW! You singlehandedly turn my crap day into a day that really 'ain't too bad' after all... In fact it's incredibly promising, methinks!
Adore you thinking this piece was as fab as you described, it absolutely reinvigorated my day as well as my sense of self accomplishment... I'm humbled and so grateful...
Much love and hopes for an incredible shopping spree to come your way ✨ 💫 ✨
-💙
Sometimes there comes a day that starts so crummy you never think you'll be able to get it back on track, and you just KNOW the whole day is henceforth shot to shit... That's been my day so far this morning until I read your awesomely pride infusing feedback. WOW! You singlehandedly turn my crap day into a day that really 'ain't too bad' after all... In fact it's incredibly promising, methinks!
Adore you thinking this piece was as fab as you described, it absolutely reinvigorated my day as well as my sense of self accomplishment... I'm humbled and so grateful...
Much love and hopes for an incredible shopping spree to come your way ✨ 💫 ✨
-💙
Re: Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
18th Aug 2023 1:59pm
And now you’ve made mine!! Thank you right back ❤️
I shall now be on my way to the mall👢👡👗💄👠🥿💍👒👜👛👓🌂💍👑
I shall now be on my way to the mall👢👡👗💄👠🥿💍👒👜👛👓🌂💍👑
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Re: Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
18th Aug 2023 9:04pm
hahaha... I truly hope you found that diamond in the rough!!
Love and cracked up @ all your emojis.... - 😂💙💙
xoxo
Love and cracked up @ all your emojis.... - 😂💙💙
xoxo
Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
18th Aug 2023 5:22pm
if only
i was that
dark growl
the one
inside
with a howl
now thats s fantssy
i would i die for
i was that
dark growl
the one
inside
with a howl
now thats s fantssy
i would i die for
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Re: Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
18th Aug 2023 8:57pm
You made me blush... and that takes a lot!
Thank you for feeling the heady intensity that I had hoped to capture, it makes me feel like I've accomplished conveying this deeply allusive inner truth of my own, if that makes any sense at all.. lol.
Your support always makes me feel so fortunate and warmed. Thank you, my lovely.
🌹💙 - x
Thank you for feeling the heady intensity that I had hoped to capture, it makes me feel like I've accomplished conveying this deeply allusive inner truth of my own, if that makes any sense at all.. lol.
Your support always makes me feel so fortunate and warmed. Thank you, my lovely.
🌹💙 - x
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29th Aug 2023 4:21pm
Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
18th Aug 2023 6:27pm
Re: Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
18th Aug 2023 9:16pm
Hee hee hee...
Dammit, if that wasn't the reply of the year 🏆
I laughed and purrrr hummed all at the same time.
Thank you for being here with me, it wouldn't be the same without you, KP
🌹-💋
Dammit, if that wasn't the reply of the year 🏆
I laughed and purrrr hummed all at the same time.
Thank you for being here with me, it wouldn't be the same without you, KP
🌹-💋
Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
18th Aug 2023 9:54pm
How did I miss this, my god girl you are awesome
Totally kinktastic read
Love and light
Ron xx
Totally kinktastic read
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
18th Aug 2023 9:59pm
lol. That sounds like a total thumbs up to me! 👍🏻 Thanks so much for the encouraging support. I love that you felt the bit of incognito fetishistic essence that runs through... Only a few might have...
Your killer feedback is invaluable and completely cherished, my brave Knight.
Thank you thank you.
🌹-xoxo
Your killer feedback is invaluable and completely cherished, my brave Knight.
Thank you thank you.
🌹-xoxo
Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
20th Aug 2023 1:40pm
Well damn!
The art of writing is also the art of describing without saying too blatantly. This write of yours succeeds really well. It's definitely erotic but not revolving around the obvious physical aspects. It's the internal that lingers... as this write does.
This is what makes you a word artist.
Awesome write, Blue.
The art of writing is also the art of describing without saying too blatantly. This write of yours succeeds really well. It's definitely erotic but not revolving around the obvious physical aspects. It's the internal that lingers... as this write does.
This is what makes you a word artist.
Awesome write, Blue.
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Re: Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
20th Aug 2023 10:26pm
Thanks, Styx.
Appreciate the feedback and the keen observational insight.
Glad you found something of worth upon my page.
-B
Appreciate the feedback and the keen observational insight.
Glad you found something of worth upon my page.
-B
Re: Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
21st Aug 2023 2:00am
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21st Aug 2023 5:25am
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20th Aug 2023 11:33pm
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Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
@ Tim... It's beyond lovely of you to pop in and really lay out your deep, meaningful feedback. I try my upmost to access places that aren't easy for me yet hopefully can be of some relatability. If you're lucky, love and lust go beautifully hand in hand and can elevate two souls to places that almost meld them into this scorching essence of one. Oh sigh, how I simply love love love that.
You truly honor me with your amazing comments and the way in which you process, feel and enjoy my writing. I'm very humbled and genuinely thankful for it.
I miss your no holds barred, straightforwardness. Not many folks go through life deciding to speak out when they see things that aren't as they should be. Hence, you wonderfully taking no sh#t. Well, I for one, applaud that gumption.
You're a lovely addition upon my page, thanks again for being here.
🌹💙
You truly honor me with your amazing comments and the way in which you process, feel and enjoy my writing. I'm very humbled and genuinely thankful for it.
I miss your no holds barred, straightforwardness. Not many folks go through life deciding to speak out when they see things that aren't as they should be. Hence, you wonderfully taking no sh#t. Well, I for one, applaud that gumption.
You're a lovely addition upon my page, thanks again for being here.
🌹💙
Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
21st Aug 2023 6:28am
Re: Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
Wow, thank you very much
Again, I am super appreciative for your visits.
.... a bit speechless at the thoughtful feedback, too.
Best,
-B
Again, I am super appreciative for your visits.
.... a bit speechless at the thoughtful feedback, too.
Best,
-B
Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
22nd Aug 2023 12:21pm
Re: Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
22nd Aug 2023 12:23pm
What a truly lovely thing to say.... and you just lifted mine as well
Thank you so much for your visit and for sharing your thoughts.
I'm enormously appreciative.
-♡
Thank you so much for your visit and for sharing your thoughts.
I'm enormously appreciative.
-♡
Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
22nd Aug 2023 12:54pm
THIS IS ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC
SUPER HOT, SUPER SEXY. PURE VOCAL SATISFACTION
Love and light
Ron xx
SUPER HOT, SUPER SEXY. PURE VOCAL SATISFACTION
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
22nd Aug 2023 1:08pm
So... you liked it then???
(cheeky, Blue!)
I'm over the moon that you found such pleasure ✨
Loved your comments... you made my day!
🌹💙
(cheeky, Blue!)
I'm over the moon that you found such pleasure ✨
Loved your comments... you made my day!
🌹💙
Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
22nd Aug 2023 7:23pm
I miss erotica like this. I really do
It's not just about sex...it's like a communion of sorts
So nuanced...so deliberate and random
at the same time { hope that makes sense }
Sublime...spiritual and sexy AF. { Pardon my language }
You laid this vibe down lovely BV
As always much respect
Naaj
It's not just about sex...it's like a communion of sorts
So nuanced...so deliberate and random
at the same time { hope that makes sense }
Sublime...spiritual and sexy AF. { Pardon my language }
You laid this vibe down lovely BV
As always much respect
Naaj
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You deliver high praise, dear Naaj.
I'm all for the different variations of erotic spills. I love exploring them and finding creative talents and artistry in many. However, it's subtlety, yes, a nuanced hand that really is a bit of a challenge for me, so I am all smiles and goosebumps that you mentioned just that. I do get what you're saying, in regards to random and deliberate.. For me, it varies..This piece, it's a mixture of thoughts that I have or had along with pieces of my real life. Art produced from a very personal place, one that I hoped would be enticing enough to leave a long lasting and alluring impression.
Spiritual and sexy AF is music to my ears.
Thank you for feeling me.
It's always a pleasure ✨
🌹💙
I'm all for the different variations of erotic spills. I love exploring them and finding creative talents and artistry in many. However, it's subtlety, yes, a nuanced hand that really is a bit of a challenge for me, so I am all smiles and goosebumps that you mentioned just that. I do get what you're saying, in regards to random and deliberate.. For me, it varies..This piece, it's a mixture of thoughts that I have or had along with pieces of my real life. Art produced from a very personal place, one that I hoped would be enticing enough to leave a long lasting and alluring impression.
Spiritual and sexy AF is music to my ears.
Thank you for feeling me.
It's always a pleasure ✨
🌹💙
Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
22nd Aug 2023 7:51pm
You never disappoint. Your writing is gold.
Love you Blueboo 🖤🧡
Always
Jackie xoxoxo
Love you Blueboo 🖤🧡
Always
Jackie xoxoxo
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Re: Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
22nd Aug 2023 8:04pm
You're far too kind...thank you, thank you.... thank you.
Back @ ya, sister!
💙🖤💙🖤💙
(hug)
Back @ ya, sister!
💙🖤💙🖤💙
(hug)
Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
22nd Aug 2023 7:57pm
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22nd Aug 2023 8:02pm
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22nd Aug 2023 11:07pm
Re: Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
22nd Aug 2023 11:10pm
That was my ferocious Roar!!!
It's hard to satiate certain appetites....
Being hungry is common in the wild.
It's hard to satiate certain appetites....
Being hungry is common in the wild.
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22nd Aug 2023 11:23pm
Re: Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
22nd Aug 2023 11:40pm
ok ok
lol...
thought I got away with being cute and vague and apparently clueless... Am I going to eat what?
Answer - (if we're on the same page)
every. last. morsel.
lol...
thought I got away with being cute and vague and apparently clueless... Am I going to eat what?
Answer - (if we're on the same page)
every. last. morsel.
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22nd Aug 2023 11:52pm
Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
22nd Aug 2023 8:03pm
Re: Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
22nd Aug 2023 8:26pm
Awww... thanks for thinking so, Grace.
So glad you got a little essence of allure... love that!
Appreciate you taking the time, it's always wonderful to see you 🦋
🌹B
So glad you got a little essence of allure... love that!
Appreciate you taking the time, it's always wonderful to see you 🦋
🌹B
Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
Dearest, Lady Blue
I swoon reading this sensual masterpiece filled with words that perfectly describe my kind of romance. How gloriously intimate is this passage, "Look me in the eyes while unburdening yourself" Or this breathtaking passage,
"I quiver to each of my questions
You answer them thoroughly upon my body"
Such strikng imagery a "infiltrator of my flesh."
You are the embodiment of poetry.
You describe the perfect entree to love making with this passage ,
"Our transcendence begins with a devastating kiss
Slow warm and absolutely everything "
You taught me a new word as well, "solipsism."
Just too many magically sensual thoughts to mention that this piece conjures in me.
And your sexy, mellifluous voice reading the piece is such a turn on. Bravissima Conejita❣🐻💞🐰
I swoon reading this sensual masterpiece filled with words that perfectly describe my kind of romance. How gloriously intimate is this passage, "Look me in the eyes while unburdening yourself" Or this breathtaking passage,
"I quiver to each of my questions
You answer them thoroughly upon my body"
Such strikng imagery a "infiltrator of my flesh."
You are the embodiment of poetry.
You describe the perfect entree to love making with this passage ,
"Our transcendence begins with a devastating kiss
Slow warm and absolutely everything "
You taught me a new word as well, "solipsism."
Just too many magically sensual thoughts to mention that this piece conjures in me.
And your sexy, mellifluous voice reading the piece is such a turn on. Bravissima Conejita❣🐻💞🐰
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Re: Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency
25th Aug 2023 5:54pm
Thanks, GW.
Glad to see you didn't miss the chance to savor this particular recording... as well as the other various sensations/places this piece took you.
You made me feel special in the moment ... which I hoped was maybe unique to me... Much obliged for that, it meant a lot.
It's kind of you to leave your thoughts... I appreciate it.
🌹B
Glad to see you didn't miss the chance to savor this particular recording... as well as the other various sensations/places this piece took you.
You made me feel special in the moment ... which I hoped was maybe unique to me... Much obliged for that, it meant a lot.
It's kind of you to leave your thoughts... I appreciate it.
🌹B
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26th Aug 2023 7:00am
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Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency (Spoken Word)
23rd Aug 2023 2:45am
OMG!!! My amazing Princess has gone into the world where few, reach.. Hugs and kisses, Oral
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Re: Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency (Spoken Word)
25th Aug 2023 5:48pm
There's something to be said for discovering new worlds... boldly going where no woman has gone before... lol...
Thanks for finally stopping by, I thought you'd forgotten me!! (I tease!)
See you on your next jaunt back to the Deep.
Be well and be safe out there, O
🌹B
Thanks for finally stopping by, I thought you'd forgotten me!! (I tease!)
See you on your next jaunt back to the Deep.
Be well and be safe out there, O
🌹B
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Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency (Spoken Word)
23rd Aug 2023 7:21pm
Whew! Romantic subjugation and authority. The spoken and unspoken communication between the two like mental telepathy. Knowing what the other needs, even before the other does. No translation needed for the two share their own personal native tongue. The giving exhilaration as rewarding as the exhilaration from taking.
Speaking of tongue, the orator's voice adds to the sensuality and intimacy of this piece.
Enjoyed both the poem and the reading.
Speaking of tongue, the orator's voice adds to the sensuality and intimacy of this piece.
Enjoyed both the poem and the reading.
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Re: Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency (Spoken Word)
25th Aug 2023 7:24pm
Thanks for the lovely comments, Leo.
Speaking each other's various languages (love, romance, fetishistic, etc) only becomes sweeter the more fluent you each become. Putting in the effort is rewarded, in ways that are beyond what is could have ever imagined and still, there's probably more benefits that I have yet to discover! Wow, that thought is utterly spine tingling!
I'm beyond delighted that you found a bit of enjoyment in both the poem and the spoken word.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, my lovely.
🌹💙 - xo
Speaking each other's various languages (love, romance, fetishistic, etc) only becomes sweeter the more fluent you each become. Putting in the effort is rewarded, in ways that are beyond what is could have ever imagined and still, there's probably more benefits that I have yet to discover! Wow, that thought is utterly spine tingling!
I'm beyond delighted that you found a bit of enjoyment in both the poem and the spoken word.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, my lovely.
🌹💙 - xo
Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency (Spoken Word)
25th Aug 2023 7:17pm
@ Tim- Thank you so much for saying that I bring something extra, like backbone to what can be considered erotic. That's seriously amazing feedback, I'm humbled...
I have strived very hard to accomplish writing in a style that's completely my own and recognizable as such, so the fact that you felt a bit of my fingerprint, really leaves me smiling.
Thank you again, for stopping by... thrilled you found the spoken word, vibrant!
🌹💙
I have strived very hard to accomplish writing in a style that's completely my own and recognizable as such, so the fact that you felt a bit of my fingerprint, really leaves me smiling.
Thank you again, for stopping by... thrilled you found the spoken word, vibrant!
🌹💙
Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency (Spoken Word)
29th Aug 2023 12:16pm
Ok your voice is like honey flavoured erotica pouring in my ear
Girl your voice is my secret kink, I'd listen to you reading the Pizza menu lol
Love and light
Ron xx
Girl your voice is my secret kink, I'd listen to you reading the Pizza menu lol
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency (Spoken Word)
29th Aug 2023 1:30pm
hahaha... I had edit my spoken word recording on YouTube and for whatever reason that messed with the link for the DUP clip, which I had to remove and then re-add, so I'm over the moon that when listening again you find my voice aka my American accent as alluring as you do... Yummy, honey flavored erotica is my favorite ;)
Thanks for sharing your secret, I'll be sure to keep that in mind for the next one....
🌹 💙 - ⚔️
Thanks for sharing your secret, I'll be sure to keep that in mind for the next one....
🌹 💙 - ⚔️
Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency (Spoken Word)
7th Sep 2023 4:36pm
Wow!
I can't even compete!
Love you Bluevelvete!
Your adoring fan who isn't keeping up.
Elenore
I can't even compete!
Love you Bluevelvete!
Your adoring fan who isn't keeping up.
Elenore
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Re: Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency (Spoken Word)
7th Sep 2023 5:51pm
You're a much needed shot of warm goodness this afternoon, thank you for the generous kind of, E.
Your ink is something else, all together marvelous. ✨
Love you back... ;)
🌹💙
xoxo
Your ink is something else, all together marvelous. ✨
Love you back... ;)
🌹💙
xoxo
Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency (Spoken Word)
16th Sep 2023 00:48am
Computers and mobile devices are overheating.
From the title I knew this had that unspoken warning label but the spoken word threw us over the edge.
Cheese us crust Blue, that was amazing. That's all I'm going to say.
Now maybe a shower.
From the title I knew this had that unspoken warning label but the spoken word threw us over the edge.
Cheese us crust Blue, that was amazing. That's all I'm going to say.
Now maybe a shower.
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Re: Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency (Spoken Word)
16th Sep 2023 7:05am
Gotta love the little bit of steam... ♨️
Thanks for the awesome RL add... so happy you felt the heat!
🌹B
Thanks for the awesome RL add... so happy you felt the heat!
🌹B
Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency (Spoken Word)
8th Nov 2023 1:39am
Re: Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency (Spoken Word)
8th Nov 2023 3:59pm
Thanks for the lovely comment, glad you enjoyed!
Welcome to DUP ;)
I appreciate you stopping by to leave your thoughts and hope to see you around.
🌹💙-B
Welcome to DUP ;)
I appreciate you stopping by to leave your thoughts and hope to see you around.
🌹💙-B
Re. The Ferocious Nature Of Fluency (Spoken Word)
16th Feb 2024 5:33pm
Ms. Blue, the only thing I can think of more amazing than discovering your written word... is finding that you have such an amazing voice reading your own work. This is outstandingly done. Brava.
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