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Red=Velvet
Rose and your cunt
both are similar to
each other
both red
both tender
both full of fragrance
both are velvety and fluffy
both ignite joy
both covering my heart
with warmth.. n I feel like
crushing both, again and again...
both are similar to
each other
both red
both tender
both full of fragrance
both are velvety and fluffy
both ignite joy
both covering my heart
with warmth.. n I feel like
crushing both, again and again...
Published 16th Aug 2023
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16th Aug 2023 7:31am
16th Aug 2023 7:35am
It's a surprise gift for me that you added my stuff in your RL.. Thank you very much SS.. I'm grateful to you for this!!
16th Aug 2023 10:53am
The last sentence raised a mental picture of rampant moments:
: n I feel like
crushing both, again and again...
: n I feel like
crushing both, again and again...
16th Aug 2023 1:00pm
16th Aug 2023 5:04pm
The picture you paint is graphic and awakens thoughts of erotic sex.
I like that. Watch for my poetry!
Memphis
I like that. Watch for my poetry!
Memphis
16th Aug 2023 5:42pm
16th Aug 2023 5:55pm
That's a very pretty, elegant & tidy rose depicted in your poem's accompanying photograph. I know you're quite fond of them. I like the way you have linked this rose with the beauty of eroticism here too.
17th Aug 2023 4:16am
16th Aug 2023 9:53pm
Very nice piece of romantic .
you managed to do so in the poem with devices of desire.
Alliteration,assonance, rhyme .
"Red or Velvet
Velvet are corny
When I think of ....
I get so feverish"
you managed to do so in the poem with devices of desire.
Alliteration,assonance, rhyme .
"Red or Velvet
Velvet are corny
When I think of ....
I get so feverish"
17th Aug 2023 4:16am
17th Aug 2023 4:38am
A red rose used on your sexy body to give you orgasmic bliss. Keep on writing.
17th Aug 2023 4:49am
17th Aug 2023 9:57am
17th Aug 2023 7:22am
I'm a huge fan of allegories
You nailed this vibe perfectly indeed
Much respect
Naaj
You nailed this vibe perfectly indeed
Much respect
Naaj
17th Aug 2023 7:24am
Hello
Naaj
Thank you for visiting my profile, reading me and giving me the honor by adding me to your reading list. .
Naaj
Thank you for visiting my profile, reading me and giving me the honor by adding me to your reading list. .
