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Speaking in astrology
A brave soul awakens
from eternal slumber,
high roars echo in
a modern universe
you have lived
many years already
dear Leo, born under
undying punk stars
so let them hear
your wilderness,
crying to be sung
from deep within.
Published 8th Aug 2023
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8th Aug 2023 11:56pm
9th Aug 2023 4:05am
Dear N,
I really enjoy your ability to capture the essence of your subject and then allow the reader to morph it into what they need. I used Leo not only as the zodiac sign but someone I actually know so the gist of this piece had a double meaning. Great write. H🌷
I really enjoy your ability to capture the essence of your subject and then allow the reader to morph it into what they need. I used Leo not only as the zodiac sign but someone I actually know so the gist of this piece had a double meaning. Great write. H🌷
